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Rin Tohsaka discovers herself in a fantasy world. It's governed by Taoist magical theory, filled with mana and phantasmal species have driven mankind into the corner.
She discovers herself in a body of Shen Xiu, a Cultivator of silver rank and teacher in a magic school.
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Interesting and engaging concept. I can already smell the potential seeping out of the screen(hope is not my overly abused battery) But the short commings are that there is little to no environment description, no character description, no proper dialogs. Adding different perspective would be some great addition Also, author u seem to not understand the rin tosaka very well... plz read her character sheet from wiki atleast. But over all this one have great potential.
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This is a great story I hope you will continue writing it! It is one of the better Fanfictions i have read even though it has obly started.