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A spark, a flame, a light. Hope that may shine bright. But how far must we go? How far must we climb? Shackles bind us: the innocent, the naïve, the enslaved. Will we continue to be ruled by the desires and arrogance of our forefathers, or is there something more within the darkness?
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I love this book, the plot is very unique in my opinion. although there are still a few chapters but I'm sure this story will be a good story. I hope this book doesn't stop halfway
This is awesome... Great work author. So hooked on this book. Definitely worth reading. I have even added this to my library. :)..............
There are some grammatical errors, but I can vouch for the quality of the dialogue and the solid worldbuilding. I'm anticipating the meaning of the title you've picked for your novel. And yup, you need to attach some tags to your novel. This will help your exposure.
From reading just the first paragraph, I already understood the fate of this story. This truly is the makings of a starlike story. The english in this, vocabulary and grammar, are immaculate. I haven’t even spotted one flow-breaking mistake. This is one of the books I can give the authors any feedback to improve on. It’s close to perfect. I get JK Rowling vibes from it. Wow. I’d describe the book in just one word. Wow. Great job author, I love the writing. Don’t doubt yourself and keep pushing through. :)
Sorry I didn't get back to you. But, I have to say this story has the potential to be something great. I love the worldbuilding, magic building, and so much more. I just hope you continue uploading more chapters when you can. I'm not forcing you, but I really hope you upload more chapters at your leisure of course.
This book is very good, especially the setup. It gives me chills as I read, I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. Keep up the good work.
This is great! I like the worldbuilding and setup in the first chapter. The characters you've shown so far are interesting too. I actually can't wait for more. Good work author!