Ten things my best friend does not know about me

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Dinessu

Hi, i am the author__ i would obviously give myself a 5 star review because no one would do it for me. if i don't appreciate my own work how will others appreciate it for me. i know i make a lot of errors when i am writing which i would correct but other than that i know the time it took me to create every words i have published in this platform. i love my characters and my story i just hope you love it too. i am open to true criticism not made out hate but made out to improve the writer's skill.

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binni_seon

i was a lovely ride,liked the world development ,you have dealt with the high school drama and family issues very well.it was a joy reading it..keep writing

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Zherie17

Here is my review. So far, here is a friendly tip: English sentences usually begins with a CAPITAL letter and ends with a period like this (.) The improper usage of those punctuation marks and LONGER paragraphs/chapter titles turned my reading off. Story wise, grammar wise can be improved and why do not establish an interesting prologue first before jumping into a boring back story for starters. Thank you.

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MasterPizza

First of all, congratulations on writing this book. I hope you enjoy the way up to the end. I liked the character's personalities and the way you described them, they seem more alive. I would recommend you to try using Grammarly, a free app that helps in correcting grammar mistakes.

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Sunus_Writes

Reading a book of this sort immediately draws out varying emotions from me. With a few expressives on the life of a teenager, along with the FMC's personality which is simply relatable. I would say this book is top notch and a bliss to read. Good job on development of the characters ❤️

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Kittylovely

The story is amazing and i love how she gets well with her bestie, don't know why but it's probably something with me, i like when besties are incorporated in a story rather than it just revolving around the characters so..........keep it up! Edit: Their interactions are so realistic and funny especially between axel and avery,

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GEEGEE

Its quite funny actually but I can't blame her, its rare for bffs to know everything about each other. The story is simply great and exposes so much about what we go through in our daily lives. This book is for everyone and I would encourage all of you to give it a glance. Kudos to the author

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TheSuccessor

Pretty good writing for the most part. It was easy to understand and I was able to read through for the most part.

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MITCHIEWilliams

Cleo and Avery's friendship may not be perfect but it is clear that they care for each other. I love how the emotions were portrayed. Each character was properly fleshed out, I enjoyed every moment of the book, I am curious how everything will all turn out for everyone.

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NicholasZZ

Its a great book about high school romance if you are into young love this is one of the books you should absolutely try out and I think you would love it

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Aeirana

I don't usually read contemporary but I do believe this is a solid start. Albeit, there are a lot of errors in regards to capitalization and some grammar but this is easily fixable! I think the author has spent a lot of time with character building which is great, but I do believe that there may be too much dialogue at the start. I'd love to see the author take us through the main lead's life a little more and give a little more description of the world. All in all, 3.85/5! I think this book has potential!

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Motsu_Kion

I really liked the book, I found it really intersting, I found the writing weird at first, but then I realized that it was written in first person. The only downside of your book is the english errors, besides this there is the way you organize your dialogues, and it took me sometime to understand what this ____ meant. I really liked your book, I have read it till chapter 5 and I want to read more. You just need fix the english errors. I have added it to my library, and I'll be checking it from time to time.

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Ramirys

I have never seen a novel with a concept like this, it is very interesting. I think anyone who enjoys romance novels will enjoy this one because it has a refreshing plot and the author's writing style is good as well.

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Winnie_jazella1

Congrats on embarking on this journey. Your book is shockingly vey impressive and it has a lot of potential to grow further. As an author I wish you all the best.

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Joseon_Walking

This is a decent attempt though I can tell the author needs to practice their grammar we all start somewhere and it isn't something that can't be fixed later. Otherwise very interesting background and the likes.

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Sneakycat098

The novel completely fits the description as one would predict from the title. It gets interesting gradually as each chapter pass by however there are certain mistakes that I would like to point out. There are some grammatical mistakes which needs to be corrected in order to keep readers engaged. Also, the language seemed a bit off flow, if you get what I mean, otherwise everything else is good and I wish the author best of luck!

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ZeroX0666

This is actually a pretty interesting novel, it has things you would find in other novels, but it does it in such a way that you would enjoy to read it anyways. Plus it draws out emotions with it's words.

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EmberBlood

This story is simple but interesting. I like how the characters seemed realistic. The conversations are short but very easy to follow. The FMC has a cool personality which I like. Every chapter will make you want to read the next one. The writing style is intriguing. Great words choice. Even though the last couple of chapters were a little short but it was fun to read. Carry on. ..

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Queen_Endi

I've never read any novels of this genre, so it's all new to me. It is a nice read, the only criticism I have is the lack of good grammar, to improve, you could write chapters in a Google Doc, and check your spelling and grammar. Keep writing, author!