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I am sorry to all readers, this story has been terminated. It would be back soon, but as another Novel entirely. The title would be out along with few chapters.
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This story is nice, from the looks if it, the author is still a newbie. The story development is great. And I also see some confusing things in the story. Won't spoil (chapter 40-43
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This novel has a lot of potential. The plot is interesting and it's obvious that the novel is well thought out. However, there's a lot of errors in it. There are spelling errors, punctuation errors, grammatical errors and capitalization errors. Fortunately, there was nothing wrong with the flow of the story and the wording was great. The author only needs to correct the few errors. I recommend the author re-reads before publishing, download an app like Grammarly or hire someone to proofread. Overall, this was a very entertaining read. I really liked how realistic certain situations were and how natural the dialogues were depicted. I'm still in a shock about Ethan smoking at 13 lol but I truly enjoy the novel so far. [img=recommend]