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This is the beta testing server for my novel. Got a problem? Just say it. I will consider your opinion but I might not use it. If you have nothing helpful to say then don't comment.
I won't write as my grammar is trash and I don't know how to express my idea into a story.
Being a reader is more relaxing.
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What is this plot and grammar 👎👎👎 honestly editor desperately needs a spell checker and you barely know anything about the mc yet he jumps way to far ahead without explaining a single thing to the readers like who is soul how old is he why is he the only active character I won’t be adding this to my library
I just say i think שהדמות צריכה להיות לא בגוף ראשון) בתור התחלה זה לייט נובל) I think it's too direct right now and it sounds like you reading something is not like a story