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Raizen,a gamer who didn't care for anything except his standings and himself,has been teleprlorted inside a game that's been forcefully stopped years ago because of long term effects it can give the players,such as dying inside the game twice would meant death in real life.
Unfortunately an old item his father game him before dying acted as the key to allow him to enter the game that his father created to train him...Would he be able to survive until the implied game story ends?Or would he die twice midway?
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It catches the reader's attention at its first words. Sincerely waiting for further chapters. Curiosity is at the top. Hope the story continues very soon..!
At its first word it catches the readers attention. It really interesting to read the unimaginable things unfolding as we move on. Eagerly waiting to read further.
The author makes good effort in editing and rewriting the story. As someone who has read this from the beginning, it is becoming more apparent to me that the author cares about his work as well as the quality of his writing. The story has enough potential to improve and with the improving writing quality, we can expect great results in the future. This is a novel that readers shouldn't give up on. I may have been harsh in my first critical review, but the author has taken it positively and has responded by fixing his mistakes little by little. We need more positive writers like him who can take criticism and learn from it. I applaud the author for his attempt and his effort. Keep up the good work and hopefully more readers will come and enjoy this novel.
To be fair, don't read this story. It was obviously written by someone who is new to the English language. The author knows some vocabulary but doesn't use them properly, in the case of mixing up There and Their and They're as an example. Aside from one instance, all commas and periods in the first chapter do not have a space after it, making it really difficult to read for English fluent readers. Because of all the grammatical mistakes which make it obvious that the author is either a young child or someone living in a non-English country background, it's hard for me to follow the story due to the wrong uses of past tense and present tense. Basic grammar, I'm talking about. Just the basic of punctuation and grammar are missing. The story has a decent flow to it, but lacks the careful touch of a proofreader or editor. Story idea is decent, it's okay. Just okay. But because of the writing quality, it's hard to follow. People who rate this novel highly are likely also new to English and cannot figure out why I rate this so low. Good start, but the only reason why I give this 1.4/5 is thanks to it being a new story and thus having no base to rate the Stability of Updates.
To be fair I haven't read this novel yet, but just from reading the synopsis alone, with it's multiple grammatical mistakes and one obvious spelling mistake: "teleported". I'm giving this a 1/5 for writing quality, and 3/5 for everything else. I'll put up a new review after reading the first chapter in full.
The story is really interesting from the 1st word of the chapter to the last word of the chapter. I really sometimes feel what if I could really end up in the game.