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An arranged marriage? A love story? But to be broken by dreams.
He loved her
She loved him
Yet their destiny wasn't for eachother.
He found her
She found him
Will they be destined to eachother?
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This is a review of the first two chapters. The story centers on Guinevere an immature little sister who thinks the world revolves around her. The heroine found out that her parents have arranged a marriage for her so she: 1) blames her older brother for not taking her place and 2) falls in love with a stranger she meets. Guinevere’s bratty behavior makes the reader question how she was raised especially after “meeting “ her brother. Guinevere’s brother response to his sister’s pain can be summarized as “so what?!” “I am in love!” “Praise me!” The female lead and her family are unlike able. The construction of the story is better than the content. The author is adept at transitioning between scenes. The separation between dialogue and description is clear. There are a few issues of verbs having the wrong tense. The author is good, so I hope the characters will become more like able.
I know it is too early to write a review but the Author is my friend and most of the times she asks me if the chapters she wrote is fine. There will be no bias in this review, all i can say is that everyone be prepared because this is not just any normal fantasy, like a world full of magic a powerful guy meets a powerful girl, then they fall inlove with each other. Then their love for each other will be ruined because the guy found a better girl, they fight for their love then live happily ever after. No that's not it, ther will be many twists and unexpected things that will happen in this story
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