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Write a reviewReally good novel thanks but you dropped rip π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π¦π’π’π’
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The book is very good I just wish that he could show his fallen archangel form more time. I also think that you should bring the dragons back
IMPORTANT: READ TO END:IF U HAVE READ THIS NOVEL AND FOUND IT TO UR LIKING, U MAY HAVE NOTICED IT QUIT PART WAY. THIS IS NOT ENTIRELY TRUE THOUGH AS AUTHOR HAS DIFFERENT ACCOUNT THAT THEY HAVE WRITEN MORE ON ABOUT IT. THE ACCOUNTS NAME IS PeerlessProminence. THE NAME OF THE STORY IS VERY SIMILAR. IT IS CALLED All Around System. THERE IS NO "The" IN THE NEW NOVEL NAME AND THERE'S MORE CHAPTERS IN THAT VERSION THAT WAS COPY/PASTED AND THEN CONTINUED. DO NOT WASTE POWER STONES HERE. IF U WANNA SUPPORT AUTHOR GO TO THAT NOVEL INSTEAD. AS APPARENTLY THIS IS NOT WHERE THE AUTHOR IS CONTINUEING AND DECIDED TO CONTINUE THERE INSTEAD......... Also sorry about the caps lock there. Figured it'd be easier to notice. Oh... And my real review would be 4.5 for all but update stability. So far at least. I got here late after all.
I am newbie here at Webnovel and this is the first novel I have read. It actually lacks the momentum of the plot at some points but still, great job!
I like this book a lot and I wish that I could read more chapters that is at least when they are uploaded so that me and the authors many fans can read the book that we love
I like this book a lot it is really interesting because itβs basically about a guy getting cheats and becomes overpowered itβs really good I like very much and I hope the writer comes out with new chapters cause I love this book
Reveal SpoilerI read once for fun with no mind of reviewing it. And I found it decent read if your bored and want to read a flat story about and op retard. Then I read it again to write a review. PROS: fast pace like really fast pace. Has op mc (pro for me sense I like op novels),system novel, decent stories. CONS: mc is a retard, system does everything for mc, personality changes to fast. Example in first couple of chapters his afraid of woman because he was almost raped 2 chapters later he has se.x with a stranger 3 chapters later he want s harem. Some parts of the story seem really force.ex when he tells the system to make him faint to make it look like his tired but even the system tells him that it's pointless sense they see that his not even a lil tired. It seems like the system was created by him but he doesn't show the intelligence need to make it. His mentally 25 years old but acts like his intel is that of a 4 year old like the random chick that raped him tells him what a yang pure body is and 5 chapters later he says "what's a pure yang body"? And it happens a couple of other times so you telling me someone like that can make a cheat system for an ONLINE GAME? Wonder if everyone can hack that mmo game. But yea if you read this with your brain turned off it's a decent read if you read it with your brain turned on it's going to be terrible read. So yea if you like the first 23 chapters just keep reading if not I would just give up in it. But yea each to their ownπ
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The story itself is very amusing to read but it would be better if the updates are a little bit faster,also the plot is quite rushed I think?but still it is a great novel keep up the good work and thanks!
I started reading this because the ratings were rather high. Iβm sad to say but after 70 chapters, I am disappointed. Writing Quality: I know that the writer is not native to English and there is a certain allotment for this, but I still find the vocabulary to be quite poor. Stability of Updates: I started reading this after 70 chapters were already released but looking at the update times, its somewhat unreliable. Story Development: In my opinion, instead of the all-around system, itβs better to call this the wish system. Why? Because every time thereβs conflict or even a bit of a challenge added, the system comes up with a solution. This is the case for even the most inconveniences that comes up for the MC. Some examples are, his level being too low? Solution: magic fruit. Canβt find more fruit? Solution: magic radar. Canβt store all the fruit gathered? Solution: infinite storage. Runs into a strong enemy? Solution: systems upgrades, and he easily crushes the enemies. About to be raped? Solution: magically can use portals to escape. Gets molested by a beauty? His only weakness is cured, and he even powers up. Character Design: All of the characters are rather hollow. Every female is a beauty and every male is ugly except for the MC who is as pretty as the other females. Basically, heβs a trap character. World Background: Some of the background of the universe has been revealed but it was more of an information dump after the MC is βcuredβ. Instead of having the MC gather info as he progresses, the best way to reveal this information is during pillow talk time it seems. All of this can be summarized as βneeds workβ.
Reveal SpoilerLove this book, it has so many comedic parts and just as much action but my 1 question is what happened to the guys "brother" because we don't know if he went back home or not
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Have you ever read a more predictable novel than this? Chances are you have, but that doesnβt excuse the fact that this novel is utterly trash and nonsense to the point where I know whatβs going to happen without trying. This is coming from a person who hates predictable novels so if this is your cup of tea then go for it; no ones stopping you
Pretty novel! Im not really a writter but I can say that I already read many books . And this one were very exciting and fascinating that updates were pretty anticipated. The twists were shocking and blood boiling. Anyway please continue writting and goodluck for your novel!
he is supposed to be the guy who created the All-Around System but reading up to this point isn't he just to dimwitted and his lack of common sense is outstanding
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To author please stop calling every goddamn woman beautiful. If they're in a world of beauties then they are just average at best.
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Hi guys! I will try edit the other chapters because in the early chapters, my writing was so bad but after writing many times, the latest chapters are I think can be passable already so please read my 1st time novel everyone!
It's a good story, I love it even tho it has a lot of mistakes but what can I say, it's hard to find someone who can actually write a great like this.... I notice that a lot of people like this story and supports, I'm glad thought because the author actually deserves it.
Really good novel thanks but you dropped rip π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π¦π’π’π’
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
.............................................................................................................................................. DROP TIME
The book is very good I just wish that he could show his fallen archangel form more time. I also think that you should bring the dragons back
IMPORTANT: READ TO END:IF U HAVE READ THIS NOVEL AND FOUND IT TO UR LIKING, U MAY HAVE NOTICED IT QUIT PART WAY. THIS IS NOT ENTIRELY TRUE THOUGH AS AUTHOR HAS DIFFERENT ACCOUNT THAT THEY HAVE WRITEN MORE ON ABOUT IT. THE ACCOUNTS NAME IS PeerlessProminence. THE NAME OF THE STORY IS VERY SIMILAR. IT IS CALLED All Around System. THERE IS NO "The" IN THE NEW NOVEL NAME AND THERE'S MORE CHAPTERS IN THAT VERSION THAT WAS COPY/PASTED AND THEN CONTINUED. DO NOT WASTE POWER STONES HERE. IF U WANNA SUPPORT AUTHOR GO TO THAT NOVEL INSTEAD. AS APPARENTLY THIS IS NOT WHERE THE AUTHOR IS CONTINUEING AND DECIDED TO CONTINUE THERE INSTEAD......... Also sorry about the caps lock there. Figured it'd be easier to notice. Oh... And my real review would be 4.5 for all but update stability. So far at least. I got here late after all.
I am newbie here at Webnovel and this is the first novel I have read. It actually lacks the momentum of the plot at some points but still, great job!
I like this book a lot and I wish that I could read more chapters that is at least when they are uploaded so that me and the authors many fans can read the book that we love
I like this book a lot it is really interesting because itβs basically about a guy getting cheats and becomes overpowered itβs really good I like very much and I hope the writer comes out with new chapters cause I love this book
Reveal SpoilerI read once for fun with no mind of reviewing it. And I found it decent read if your bored and want to read a flat story about and op retard. Then I read it again to write a review. PROS: fast pace like really fast pace. Has op mc (pro for me sense I like op novels),system novel, decent stories. CONS: mc is a retard, system does everything for mc, personality changes to fast. Example in first couple of chapters his afraid of woman because he was almost raped 2 chapters later he has se.x with a stranger 3 chapters later he want s harem. Some parts of the story seem really force.ex when he tells the system to make him faint to make it look like his tired but even the system tells him that it's pointless sense they see that his not even a lil tired. It seems like the system was created by him but he doesn't show the intelligence need to make it. His mentally 25 years old but acts like his intel is that of a 4 year old like the random chick that raped him tells him what a yang pure body is and 5 chapters later he says "what's a pure yang body"? And it happens a couple of other times so you telling me someone like that can make a cheat system for an ONLINE GAME? Wonder if everyone can hack that mmo game. But yea if you read this with your brain turned off it's a decent read if you read it with your brain turned on it's going to be terrible read. So yea if you like the first 23 chapters just keep reading if not I would just give up in it. But yea each to their ownπ
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The story itself is very amusing to read but it would be better if the updates are a little bit faster,also the plot is quite rushed I think?but still it is a great novel keep up the good work and thanks!
I started reading this because the ratings were rather high. Iβm sad to say but after 70 chapters, I am disappointed. Writing Quality: I know that the writer is not native to English and there is a certain allotment for this, but I still find the vocabulary to be quite poor. Stability of Updates: I started reading this after 70 chapters were already released but looking at the update times, its somewhat unreliable. Story Development: In my opinion, instead of the all-around system, itβs better to call this the wish system. Why? Because every time thereβs conflict or even a bit of a challenge added, the system comes up with a solution. This is the case for even the most inconveniences that comes up for the MC. Some examples are, his level being too low? Solution: magic fruit. Canβt find more fruit? Solution: magic radar. Canβt store all the fruit gathered? Solution: infinite storage. Runs into a strong enemy? Solution: systems upgrades, and he easily crushes the enemies. About to be raped? Solution: magically can use portals to escape. Gets molested by a beauty? His only weakness is cured, and he even powers up. Character Design: All of the characters are rather hollow. Every female is a beauty and every male is ugly except for the MC who is as pretty as the other females. Basically, heβs a trap character. World Background: Some of the background of the universe has been revealed but it was more of an information dump after the MC is βcuredβ. Instead of having the MC gather info as he progresses, the best way to reveal this information is during pillow talk time it seems. All of this can be summarized as βneeds workβ.
Reveal SpoilerLove this book, it has so many comedic parts and just as much action but my 1 question is what happened to the guys "brother" because we don't know if he went back home or not
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Have you ever read a more predictable novel than this? Chances are you have, but that doesnβt excuse the fact that this novel is utterly trash and nonsense to the point where I know whatβs going to happen without trying. This is coming from a person who hates predictable novels so if this is your cup of tea then go for it; no ones stopping you
Pretty novel! Im not really a writter but I can say that I already read many books . And this one were very exciting and fascinating that updates were pretty anticipated. The twists were shocking and blood boiling. Anyway please continue writting and goodluck for your novel!
he is supposed to be the guy who created the All-Around System but reading up to this point isn't he just to dimwitted and his lack of common sense is outstanding
The Book has stopped being updated for the last few weeks.The Book has stopped being updated for the last few weeks.The Book has stopped being updated for the last few weeks.The Book has stopped being updated for the last few weeks.
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To author please stop calling every goddamn woman beautiful. If they're in a world of beauties then they are just average at best.
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Hi guys! I will try edit the other chapters because in the early chapters, my writing was so bad but after writing many times, the latest chapters are I think can be passable already so please read my 1st time novel everyone!
It's a good story, I love it even tho it has a lot of mistakes but what can I say, it's hard to find someone who can actually write a great like this.... I notice that a lot of people like this story and supports, I'm glad thought because the author actually deserves it.