The Big Bang Assassin (The Big Bang Theory)

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BlackNilton

Hi Everyone Alright, Author of this story introducing himself, so I come to say once again that English is not my native language, I would love for you to help me, to correct some errors in the novel If you have any questions about jokes or references from my country that appear from time to time, just mark the sentence and I will explain it in detail Any Questions Ask Here

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Desah07

Um protagonista Br que foda, não é muito comum ver um protagonista brasileiro, e por isso você tem o meu voto de 5 estelas. ................

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Victor_Venegas

I have problems with the way this novel is written, I don't know if it is a problem when translating or simply the author abuses artificial intelligence, the character interactions are robotic and meaningless, for someone who has lived with a family since For more than nine years the way the MC treats the family seems as if they were complete strangers to him. As I know that the author may be abusing AI, the dialogues and the description of who says the dialogues are uncomfortable, an example of this is immediately adding adjectives to the name of a character, little Sheldon for example. We know who Sheldon is, there is no need to use the same adjective over and over again. Now another thing that bothers me is the attempt to measure intelligence using IQ, if you have a system, as is the case in this novel, what good is boasting about IQ points (which by the way DO NOT measure intelligence in a person, having a high IQ doesn't mean you're a genius), just take it as status points. I wish the author good luck.

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Erick200

Primeira vez que vejo um protagonista Br, só por isso tome 5★. .......................................................................................................................................

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Jordan1908

can't lie I've never read a big bang fanfic and couldn't get into young Sheldon but I'm loving this. pls don't drop

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N1gga

Okay! this my review after reading the first five chapters. Its a good premise, but the writing is pretty bad. Pretty sure author is using ai to fix some mistakes but he should really use grammarly as well. the names get confusing as well, you use little and big george for the two George's but you should use georgie or george jr,also you call memaw as connie which is a little less annoying to read than little and big george but is still annoying nonetheless. The story has potential, you just need to work on writing.

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The_man_The_myth

You only have two reveiws that aren’t but and some of them look like your alts

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IMBOREDSOIREAD

All i can say this is a good story and it's worth to read

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PokemonJoker

The writing is not well done. Grammar and spelling are awful and it makes the story impossible to read.

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Aris82

the story concept was novel. it very good in fact. the storyline development is also very stable. also the characters have a good representation. so overall will rate is more than 4 stars. just hope that it will have more updates.

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CrimsonFcker

i love what you've done so far. i look forward to how you develop the story. good luck I'm rooting for you.

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ZaXan

looking copper stuck with gold good stuff

Una historia entretenida con una conexión especial que me parece curiosa. Me parece una novela que merece su lectura. Espero que continúes con el desarrollo de esta hasta el final.

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SUBARU_otaco

Muito bom a obra Agora fiquei com uma Music brasileira "The Girl From Ipanema" Olha que coisa mais linda mais cheia de graça É ela menina que vem e que passa Num doce balanço, a caminho do mar Moça do corpo dourado Do sol de Ipanema O seu balançado é mais que um poema É a coisa mais linda que eu já vi passar Ah, porque sou tão sozinho Ah, porque tudo é tão triste Ah, a beleza que existe A beleza que não é só minha Que também passa sozinha Ah, se ela soubesse Que quando ela passa O mundo sorrindo se enche de graça E fica mais lindo por causa do amor Tall and tan and young and lovely The girl from Ipanema Goes walking and when she passes Each one she passes Goes ahh When she walks she's like a samba That swings so cool and sways so gently That when she passes, each one she passes Goes ahh Oh, but he watches her so sadly How can he tell her I love her Yes, he would give his heart gladly But each day when she walks to the sea She looks straight ahead, not at him Tall and tan and young and lovely The girl from Ipanema goes walking And when she passes, he smiles But she doesn't see Oh, but he sees her so sadly How can he tell her I love her Yes, he would give his heart gladly But each day when she walks to the sea She looks straight ahead, not at him Tall and tan and young and lovely The girl from Ipanema goes walking And when she passes, he smiles But she doesn't see She just doesn't see No, she doesn't see But she doesn't see She doesn't see No, she doesn't see

i need more pls 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 only one chp more

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Mad_Governor

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It's very good, it's fun to read and the prota is good tooThe story is really fun and I thought the Assassin's Creed system was really interesting.

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augusto_henrique

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Sa1nt3r

A good Assassin's Creed fanfic that i have found in a while the writing style might need improvements

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Himanshu_Dwivedi_4919

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