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dustsans666

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Hamza_Amiro

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2yr
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CosmoLuz

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Johannes_Forsblad

Love it! Is there any chance of you picking this up again? I think the premise i very intresting. I do sure hate This 140 minimum Word requirement

3yr
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Silver_Epsilon

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Darkujuj

Nice story. I'm waiting for more chapters. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Shota_FBI

Please update soon...šŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ˜  šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜€

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4bidienkingdom

Great story so far and MC brutal enough, hope chapter this story will update.anyway thank you for novel.

3yr
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amaturewriter

Dear author.........character development is a major pillar of a story..without it....the stories garbage....like what happened?...in cho 1 it was 4/10 but then it just went to zero...like theres zero CD and SD.....the MC is bland and so are all the other characters..like this isnt a bash,,,its just that the SD, CD and even WQ are barely present

4yr
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Stoneheart

A broken protag doing what he wants across the multiverse. I write what i feel like doing, if you don't like it feel free to leave a 1 star.

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Ali_Makles

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dustsans666

šŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŽšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŽšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ‘ŒšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ˜ŒšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ˜šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ŠšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ŠšŸ‘ŠšŸ˜ŒšŸ’ÆšŸ˜ŽšŸ‘ŠšŸ‘

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Hamza_Amiro

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CosmoLuz

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3yr
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Johannes_Forsblad

Love it! Is there any chance of you picking this up again? I think the premise i very intresting. I do sure hate This 140 minimum Word requirement

3yr
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Silver_Epsilon

Lumayan_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3yr
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Darkujuj

Nice story. I'm waiting for more chapters. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Shota_FBI

Please update soon...šŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ˜  šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜€

3yr
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4bidienkingdom

Great story so far and MC brutal enough, hope chapter this story will update.anyway thank you for novel.

3yr
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amaturewriter

Dear author.........character development is a major pillar of a story..without it....the stories garbage....like what happened?...in cho 1 it was 4/10 but then it just went to zero...like theres zero CD and SD.....the MC is bland and so are all the other characters..like this isnt a bash,,,its just that the SD, CD and even WQ are barely present

4yr
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Stoneheart

A broken protag doing what he wants across the multiverse. I write what i feel like doing, if you don't like it feel free to leave a 1 star.

4yr
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Ali_Makles

šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

4yr
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