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I am a fan, I really like your book..especially the concept's like transformed fox part...you do you...just don't make this a tragic..angst story of rape and betrayal like all other female HP fanfic..though if you want just add betrayal but NOT with/between Iris or MC but someone else..and allow only MC to have chakra..make him special...once again just suggesting...GOOD SHOW..GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! View More

manny0101: Ok. I'll try to make this as simple as I can.

1. This is Harry Potter world that has a proper government and proper laws so MC can't just do whatever he wants and get away with it just because he has the strength to do so.

2. He's a kid that has been tortured most of his life and is insecure. He saw his mother die in front of him and doesn't want to lose anyone else he cares about because he was being careless. So he is overly cautious until he has enough power to defend against those who might harm him or any of his loved ones.

3. He is a minor and thus has little to no power. He can't just nab Iris from her home. It will cause too much trouble.

4. MC will be labelled as the next dark lord if he were make a move now. He can't be made too OP at this point of time or be seen showing power unknown to other wizards. His father is his enemy and had so many friends in the government. They'll do anything to turn the people against him. Laying low and out of sight is his best option.

I hope this is enough to sate your complaints.

5. He hasn't used much magic because while his chakra reserves are high due to so much use everyday, his magic is not that much higher than average. Of course it isn't. He's a kid. How can anyone expect him to contend against an experienced ***** wizard or a giant monster of a snake with just magic? Chakra is is best option.

Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C9
3 days ago

manny0101: Ok. I'll try to make this as simple as I can.

1. This is Harry Potter world that has a proper government and proper laws so MC can't just do whatever he wants and get away with it just because he has the strength to do so.

2. He's a kid that has been tortured most of his life and is insecure. He saw his mother die in front of him and doesn't want to lose anyone else he cares about because he was being careless. So he is overly cautious until he has enough power to defend against those who might harm him or any of his loved ones.

3. He is a minor and thus has little to no power. He can't just nab Iris from her home. It will cause too much trouble.

4. MC will be labelled as the next dark lord if he were make a move now. He can't be made too OP at this point of time or be seen showing power unknown to other wizards. His father is his enemy and had so many friends in the government. They'll do anything to turn the people against him. Laying low and out of sight is his best option.

I hope this is enough to sate your complaints.

5. He hasn't used much magic because while his chakra reserves are high due to so much use everyday, his magic is not that much higher than average. Of course it isn't. He's a kid. How can anyone expect him to contend against an experienced ***** wizard or a giant monster of a snake with just magic? Chakra is is best option.

Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C9
3 days ago
I know..just suggesting to be safe... View More

CaptainBoyHole: Every novel doesn't have rape.

The Novel's Mob · C5
6 days ago
bru I was just suggesting..but I understand I TOO AM AN AUTHOR..guess I was a bit of an asshole, it's just story is cool and that MC had amazing power's but he let Iris get hurt because he was scared-he lived with a monster of a father that tutored him and caused Mc to go cold/ or something like similar..but I admit I may have come off as forceful in my suggestions ...sorry author View More

Dhaliwal2: Here's a suggestion, pick a pen and write a Fanfic of your own with your ideas. Let the author write what he wants. If you don't like the way story is progressing then just drop it. You are just demotivating the author.

Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C9
6 days ago
world travel.....world travel....... View More
In naruto with instant mastery. · C0
1 week ago
world travel!!!!!!!! View More
In naruto with instant mastery. · C0
1 week ago

amaturewriter: Good luck..**..don't make mc a beta....he is already at the apex...make him show the rest of the world that when he is in highschool..** Just suggesting make harem something realistic not retarded like 10 or more,,,,also he is in no peerage like in most fanfic..be special author, be special.........anyway your book..epic..GOOD LUCK AND GOOD SHOW!!!!!!!

The New Issei · C11
1 week ago
Good luck..**..don't make mc a beta....he is already at the apex...make him show the rest of the world that when he is in highschool..** Just suggesting make harem something realistic not retarded like 10 or more,,,,also he is in no peerage like in most fanfic..be special author, be special.........anyway your book..epic..GOOD LUCK AND GOOD SHOW!!!!!!! View More

Peace12345: He will be fighting himself while limiting himself to a normal humans level, same for Griselda. It will be a fight based purely on skill. Honestly I do not know how it will turn out since it will be my first time writing something like that.

The New Issei · C11
1 week ago
MC trashes Griselda or alleast's even's her in skill View More
The New Issei · C11
1 week ago
dude make it so that only MC can use tailed beast's..other wise it's stupid. Also make MC take Iris away with him..just suggesting View More
Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C11
1 week ago
OK...how about normal happy romance instead of some tragic ****??? not to sugar...maybe a bit sweet...bittersweet??... View More

daoistxuanlong: ....errr to much sugar for me

Fate's Request: A Harry Potter FanFiction · C29
1 week ago
Author bro....make Hermione learn of MC sickness...she'll feel bad and they proclaim her undying love for him...make this a happy story...not an angst and tragic ****...just suggesting View More
Fate's Request: A Harry Potter FanFiction · C29
1 week ago
First ***** View More
Fate's Request: A Harry Potter FanFiction · C29
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Rebirth 1973 · C1
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
Rebirth 1973 · C1
1 week ago
world travel bru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! View More
In naruto with instant mastery. · C0
1 week ago
dude this is bull****!!!!..look this is interesting no doubt...but come on..the MC is a *****..make him OP, I mean he has elemental magic...don't give other character's his power or you know..give them chakra, if you do..the book becomes stupid...make MC take Iris away and live with him at end of 3 rd year as no one would help her... also during third you could develop romance....make MC OP..like his patronous is 10 times more powerful than Iris,,,,just suggesting...you have an OP Character and an interesting concept...but the MC is like a beta..it's annoying.. View More
Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C9
1 week ago
sniff...sniff....chesss? do I see Sona in the foreseeable future???????/ View More
The New Issei · C8
1 week ago
make hermione learn of all his dark **** and she'll forgive him View More
New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C132
1 week ago
Don't make Mc train his family..it's stupid....only MC should be special. View More
Ascending the Heaven's · C14
1 week ago

amaturewriter: Need more.....but MC is a *****. ..All bark no bite...Make MC op...like kill basilisk in one shot....romance...fluff...Make it so that only he can use chakra... no need other character with his power,,,..pls don't add rape, cheating, angst, tragedy in your novel.....Make it happy or you know...not dark....ANY WAY GOOD LUCK

Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C7
1 week ago
Need more.....but MC is a *****. ..All bark no bite...Make MC op...like kill basilisk in one shot....romance...fluff...Make it so that only he can use chakra... no need other character with his power,,,..pls don't add rape, cheating, angst, tragedy in your novel.....Make it happy or you know...not dark....ANY WAY GOOD LUCK View More
Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C7
1 week ago

amaturewriter: suggestion's: longer chps....op MC-I mean INFINITY GAUNTLET....MC X ROMANCE....ie: Shuri and Hela [virgin---more fun].....fluff....dosn't make other people strong..only he himself is strong...if you go harem don't go stupid like 10..make it small like 3 or max 5....anyway..GOODLUCK!!!!!!!
INTERESTING CONCEPT

**Dropped** · C0
1 week ago

creater_of_worlds: Thx for the good chapter

In the DC World with a System · C4
1 week ago
I dont care...I love it.. :).......as long as it isn't rais..infact make rais be a ***** and then make her regret her action's..just suggesting..though try for sona..if you do Harem make it small like 3...5 max View More

Peace12345: He is going to be super strong. As for Sona, no comment.

The New Issei · C6
1 week ago
you made my day bro...** add sona if possible..either way...I like it, **: don't neuter the MC nah I mean?...Make MC one man army.....god luck View More

Peace12345: .......HE IS NOT GOING TO BE WITH RIAS!!!! I HAVE SAID THIS MULTIPLE TIMES! Phew.....Sorry. Just got tired of saying this every chapter.

The New Issei · C6
2 weeks ago
suggestion's: longer chps....op MC-I mean INFINITY GAUNTLET....MC X ROMANCE....ie: Shuri and Hela [virgin---more fun].....fluff....dosn't make other people strong..only he himself is strong...if you go harem don't go stupid like 10..make it small like 3 or max 5....anyway..GOODLUCK!!!!!!!
INTERESTING CONCEPT View More
**Dropped** · C0
2 weeks ago
Don't make MC get slut's as women! too common and stupid... go the innocent virgin route. View More
In the DC World with a System · C4
2 weeks ago

SilentByakko: Ignore that douche... Your story is going really well. You seem to have found a good basic direction to take the plot, and I like the relationship. Some say its too young, but wiz/witches mature faster and it's common practice among nobles.

Only thing that you might keep in mind is that it is a little wordy at times. There are some sentences that could be combined to express your thoughts more concisely. Also, some information that is automatically assumed doesn't actually have to be written. It can just be mentioned or infered at a later time.

Good story, keep it up!

I am in Harry Potter! · C34
2 weeks ago
**: make draco OP..just suggesting View More
The Grey (Dramione) · C0
2 weeks ago
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