/ Teen / The Color of Night
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This is novel is based on the true life story of a girl, Altine was was abducted in the course of highway robbery. She was forced to live in captivity till she doubted everything she ever believed in. She is able to get away from her captors only to find she is a captive of her own mind. This story takes us through her struggle to purge herself and live a normal life, plots of revenge as she seeks to find justice for how she was treated and finally to the truth about who she is.
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It's not enough to judge a book with 2 chapters, but I love the well-constructed plot bc i like this kinda dark concept, and your writing style is so good it captured the scene so well. Great job! Keep it up, Author!
First of all this is an amazing book, I've read the first few chapters and I enjoyed every detail.... It's interesting. This book is the book for all the book lovers out there. another unique view of this book is it's amount of focus on the importance of friendship.
Although it's difficult to give an overall view of the story with just 3 chapters I do believe this novel can do very well and the author has clearly shown his passion through his writing and this is a novel that will certainly do well if the author keeps it up
The plot unfolds with a young woman, who is clearly traumatized. What it is, I shall not say, so you, yes you reader, must find out for yourself. While reading this, I found the flow to be quite good; overall, I see this as a promising read. In terms of grammar issues, other than one other misspelling, the grammatical error I found most frequently was run-on sentences, something which is easily made by a large majority of writers. My advice to you would be to comb through your chapters while using grammarly or another grammar correcting app to assist you. ( heard grammarly might not be able to pick out run-on sentences, but it is still worth a try ) However, I think this has great potential if it could be polished a bit more, so keep up the good work, Author !
I'll start from the beginning. Cover page: it's great! Title: also great! Both in relation to the content of the abstract, now the synopsis itself. Synopsis should be original, encourage reading, ect. You serve everything as if on a tray. This way of encouraging reading is not effective. Leave the question at the end of it, for example: Can she find peace after the traumatic experience? etc... I see already a lot of dialogues in the story, the text lacks at least short descriptions of places, people, etc. For the moment you are doing well! I will come back ;)
This story is creepy in a good way. The plot is intriguing and unique. It's very well written. I felt a bit confused at some parts, but that's on me, of course. All in all, a very good story with lots of potential!
Your writing is excelled and the development of story are really interesting. Over all, everything is good, except one. Sometime when I read, I don't really get or has no idea what just happened. 🙂💐