The Cosmic entity of the marvel universe

LV 5

Dragonblaze

While the writing style is a bit *******ish, the plot of the story is quite enticing in itself. I'm hooked. I would mainly suggest being careful about punctuation marks like comma and full stop. It sometimes occurs at places where they are not needed, and sometimes missing at places where they are needed. Otherwise, as I said before, this is quite enjoyable. I would like to see more from this.

LV 6

Pedro_Padre

Lots of promise. Powers of life and light. Those are awesome powers. But as a cosmic entity, wouldn't he have difficulty finding things interesting when he could do them by snapping his fingers. Anyway, great story, please give longer chapters next time.

LV 3

Jake_Knight

Cosmic entity of life? Isnt that the pheonix? anyway good story man keep it up WHAT EVER YOU DO DO NOT DROP THIS IS GOOD I. WANT. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRR-*COUGH *COUGH *COUGH *DIES