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I created my own system

Fantasy 127 Chapters 420.9K Views
Author: LAZYHEAD

4.38 (16 ratings)

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WSA 2024 ENTRY NOVEL----

My talent can be said above average but for my family I am useless. Six years after the incident that I caused I accidentally created a system.
Now I wonder if I will fail again....with my new power I will make sure my cute little older brother, sister and especially my Father will pay the price of creating a monster.... Me

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    WeavedSlave

    In summary, this is a story of a thirteen year old boy who created something (which I think is a system) in a secret library, and with the goal of becoming stronger using the system he created. Strengths of the story are simple-straightforward language, simplicity of author's tone and slightly meaningful story development. Weaknesses includes the misuse of punctuation marks, extremely slow pacing, and the lack of proper characterization. While reading it, I don't feel thrilled nor can I find strong suspense but nonetheless, it's readable. In my opinion, there are a lot of things to correct. Really. I recommend it to all youngsters around the world.

    3mth
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    mo_86
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    I have read many books of the same genre, but i got to say that this one feels very new again. I love the world building and the cohesion of old and new. Looking forward to the next chapters!

    2mth
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    Eman_x

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    4mth
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    Captain_Sadistic

    Only read chapters one to four at the moment I'm writing the review. I'll be honest It looks like the story has potential but it feels a little slow. A little better writing style and a faster pace should help boost the quality of your story. Keep it up. Good luck.

    3mth
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    thehumanbeing

    Very bland concept. Once again, I don't give out many reviews but this one the authors gotta know his shortcomings. And personally I don't like harem so I'm sorry author. Was trying out new novels but this one was a bit lacking in world background. The story has potential.

    3mth
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    AncientInk

    It's quite a nice story, only red till chapter 2. I do have a question though.Is it harem coz I'm not really a fan of it. But either way great job.

    4mth
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    Otu_Harriet_4678

    This is my first time trying a system book and this got me hooked. interesting and the auxiliary made it easy to understand a few terms used. Thanks author

    3mth
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    SPPrincess

    I was actually drawn in by the title. I mean...that's pretty cool in itself, who wouldn't want to build their own system. Though I was confused as to why to needed to get stronger if we he created the system himself. But....Great job author!!! Thumbs up!

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    2mth
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    Ailiseu

    Alrighty! So I don't really like when mc is a child because they always act childish which they should be but this one is good because I can see potential on our mc and what's more he created his own system which most novels only show that a system would appear somehow but this time the mc created hiw own which is good for a change. I'm just excited for mc beating his siblings and showing them that they are wrong for mistreating him. (I'm only at chapter 4 by the way and I'm already excited) Please give it a try I know most people are tired of system novels but this one is decent I can definitely say so myself.

    3mth
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    HeavenlyMike

    I can genuinely see the potential in this...🔥

    3mth
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    JJ_Francis

    Someone call for the best? This is it, everything and more

    3mth
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    davinaaugust

    This book is cool and a new kind of genre for me

    3mth
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    JJ_Francis

    Ok! Starting from the synopsis I was captivated adding with the author's confidence the chapters are amazing and build up nice

    3mth
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    Forteller

    Character is likeable even though he's just a kid. I'm enjoying the setting so far and the story is fairly easy to read tbh, great work ❤️

    3mth
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    Kelvar10_

    Moment I saw the revenge theme, I signed straight up 👌🔥 Better be good, leaving a 5 star in case

    1mth
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    FloxyBelle

    Ok. When I saw the title, I was like; 'That's a first' which actually intrigued me. Then I read a few chapters which was quite interesting. Although the mc is a child, but I guess I can work with that. But in total it's a nice plot and I'd love to see how it goes.

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