The Council of Heroes

Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

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Raphis

Hmm... Even though the story is excellent, quite intense, challenging, and every event is written neatly, why is your writing so messy? 😑 Honestly, when I read it, it's easy to imagine, but your writing becomes a barrier. Try to differentiate more between narrative and dialogue texts. Also, pay attention to certain factors that should look impressive, but you make them seem ordinary. But truly, this novel is very good.