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The Cultivating Seductress System
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Sarah, a commoner girl from the slums meets a mysterious blue light in the forest.
The girl ran from the blue light in fear and hesitation. Trying to find a way out before she made a choice she didn't understand.
She didn't want to make her choice. But soon the blue light forced her to make the choice. Her only choice.
She pressed [Yes]...
[Welcome to the Cultivating Seductress System host!]
The Cultivating Seductress System?
Sarah had used her lustful nature to have control all over the slums and the mortal world. Using men and women, both, to get the things she desired while indulging in the bodies of those she seduced.
But with this new mysterious system, will she be able to take the fruits of those cultivators as well?
Will she be able to seduce those arrogant cultivators into doing her bidding?
If she could...
'Now that would be interesting.'
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Author here! This is my first book ever! I’m hoping to write a very sexy story that will give the boys, and the girls something to enjoy. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).
( Even though the story isn't centred around its hentai aspect, there are a lot of sex scenes in it. So, look forward to yuri, futanari, straight, monsters, incest, etc.)
(Story gets a bit dark in some chapters, so read with caution.)
The art on the cover isn't mine so if you want me to get rid of it just tell me and I'll happily do it.
I constantly edit my previous chapters to at least have readable grammar and a good story, so expect a lot of changes in chapters while reading.
Feedback on how to improve is highly appreciated! I’m trying to make the best book I possibly can for my first time, and I'm also trying my best to improve my writing so I can write a new book in the future.
Hope you enjoy the story!
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Okay baby, you're awesome, the synopsis ain't bad and I am totally crazy for your language. I find it cute and flowing. Yet to read more but all the best.
To be honest, the story is alright, but it is hard to notice the dialogue in some chapters. The narrative has a good flow, and each character has their moments to shine. How the story goes off from the start seems like a quest guide on what’s the current aim for the mc to achieve. Aside from that, some sections amongst the chapters could have used a lot of work, but it is still a good story to read.
A decent story so far, the early chapters do suffer from a bit of a lack of polish. Some word choices and organization, personally I find could be written better for a more interesting, such as the paragraph describing the city of debauchery. There’a nothing really wrong with it, but it’s just my opinion that it lacks the artistic charictarization it could have if it were changed up just a bit. Other areas in the story also have this, while it’s not wrong, and still works, it’s more of a polish kind of thing that would give it just that little extra literary flare. All in all though, it’s a pretty solid story, certainly engaging and worth the read.
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