MC jumps around into multiple worlds without actually doing anything in any of them, it seems like the story will become chaotic and hard to follow later as tons of worlds fuse into a superworld with storylines still ongoing and the mc constantly jumping around from one thing to another.
Author, some advice read your own story and tell me what you think because for me this is more confusing than imagining Sherek's donkey impregnating the female dragon .....
MC jumps around into multiple worlds without actually doing anything in any of them, it seems like the story will become chaotic and hard to follow later as tons of worlds fuse into a superworld with storylines still ongoing and the mc constantly jumping around from one thing to another.