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The Dying Angel: Origin

Fantasy 5 Chapters 124.0K Views
Author: Adraik

4.18 (11 ratings)

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God sent him to check on the humans, and the humans became afraid of him because of the great power he had.
What do you think it would happen next?
Would our mc become a hero or maybe he would become the bad guy through out the whole story? Support me on :
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Adraik

Im the author :V and I just wanted to say that I still need to work more on the writing quality as you can see there is some mistakes in the story

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LuciferKX

I think the story is good but you need to work more on the writing quality and more about the world background too. Its an interesting story and I hope you keep writing. Im looking forward to your next series for TDA:O

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AngelValles

He died!! dammm ..... But he came back ... dont worry :V..... I think the angel suffer a lot from depression due to the humans and the system in this world!

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AngelValles

Esto fue una buena serie! You manage to entertain me .... and It was kinda of a sad this looking how society can manage to break someone like that ... I actually feel sorry for him ...

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FakeShadows

It has a pretty good plot and I think you should continue but you have ti better yourself if you want to grow by writing novels.... The writing quality is a little bit bad and the character design need more improvement

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HikariYang

I think its a good story it just needs a little bit more work ...... But you really have talent so keep writing and making the next story a little bit better

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XXXAAANNAX

The synopsis don't help me to know what this story is. But its still good once i read it .... It need a little bit more work... but I think the story in general is good

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Dadam788

This is a very good book very entertaining for when i did not have anything to do, But needs to work the writing quality. Other than that this book was great and is my favorite book at the moment.(:

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Ediimon

Dude you done ****ed up. I mean what the hell was this ****. I deal that it could have bean a great series if you had actually tried to explain his life and experiences. I deal like you just rushed it and didn't give a **** I mean come on!!

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KINGZB

I think its a pretty good story and I think u should keep working more on the story .... there is stuff u need improvement with.... and just.... keep going bro

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C0ZZK
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It was a very good story at least for my opinion.... I think you did a pretty good job on this series and ima wait for your next series to come on :)

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