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Write a reviewMe terminó encantando apesar de solo ser 50 episodios esperaré con ancias los próximos y espero que esta serie se tenga buaenas críticas ..................................................
Amazing writing quality of which i did not expect It's been 10 months as of now and there have been no new updates, but author is writing 4 books at the same time so if one of those is being worked on, I'll be good Story dev has me wondering what game will be next and hopes that there will be more customers to have more side stories while focusing on the main story I like the design of how laid-back Damian is, how mike? matt? whatever Alex's kids name is how he helped most of the early story characters get into the game and things like that The world background is kinda cliche, but it doesn't really get into it but little tidbits of how before the scourge the tech existed.
Reveal SpoilerNeed...More....Chapters.....Running....Out Of Ideas What To Do....Please....More Chapters! Overall This Novel Is A Rare Genius Idea For A Novel! And Have Different Games Than Black Tech Internet Cafe Tho I Appreciate Both Novels I Rather Read This Because This Has New Games In It.
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Nooooo why did it stop updatinggggg, author don't do this to meeeeeee 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔ಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥ
Nice novel and we are waiting for you to continue this beautiful novel ....................................................................................................................
Great want more . keep up the awesome work and don't let anyone bash on it. >iiiiiiiijsnbshsjjjjjjj
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Writing quality - 3 Average, there isn't anything special about it besides the fact that the grammar isn't horrible. Updates - 1 No more chapters beyond 50 Story Development - 2 Mostly a complete copy of Black Tech Internet Cafe System. Starts off with a rich person going into shop, buying because the prices are outrageous and that guy experiences the wonder of it and spreads the word of it. Character Design - 1 Firstly, the character is just an attempt Fang Qi stan as he's the "rules are rules" person and becomes the most op in each video games. World Background - 3 It's... good enough for the story. Overall, compared to Black Tech Internet Cafe, it appears as a complete copy while having more eastern ways. Along with that, the story is a bit bland.
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Interesting, this author seems to be serious about this novel! Just try the 50 chapters and wait for update if you like it. Author should be back within a month? **: Why is there a "translation" quality review for a orginal?
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This is a very well written story. After finishing black tech café I need something to fill that void of store owner systems. I can’t wait for more chapters and forward to last as long as black tech café did. Keep up the good work.
I like it alot, although I find the chapters a bit short but its still a great read.........................................................
Honestly there are far to few stories like this like black tech internet cafe and god level store manager etc....................140 characters
plus de chapitre ou plus de sortie de chapitre par jour car 2 tous les 2 a 3 jour c est long et les chapitre son trop court soit vous agrandisse les chapitre ou des sortie tous les jours ou plus de chapitre
I like the premisse of the story but I can't yet say much about the world or the characters. For now I would say that the characters are being quite unreal and are way to accepting. Not even talking about the deus ex Machina moments how he got so many influential people in his shop who are then not asking any relevant questions or telling the public about the effects of the shop. A bit strange but still ok. Now the real question is, is it worth it to continue reading or will you abandon it soon? You have quite a lot of stories on your profile with not so many chapters after all.
Can't wait for more! So amazing! ...........................................................................................................
Noice ...........................................................................................................................................
An Internet Cafe where you can play games that increase your cultivation base plus easy combat experience, so far it is verry good and because games can have mods and they can be made my customers the first games won't just stop being played like black tech internet cafe. Only some slight spelling mistakes.
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I really like this story. I wish I could only put 5 stars on. Please don't leave her. There are very few such stories, especially where there is a minecraft
Nice i like the sorce material and the spin of ive been folowing your content unHoly student u post great stuff good luck Moremore moremore moremore moremore
like this so far just wanna ask about your other fan fic how many of them are dropped because I think most of them but some have to been updated in a while but dont say dropped or anything
I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more give me more....... ............................ ..... ............................................
Очередной раб системы, который не имеет права поступать так как хочет, а вынужден действовать по шаблону. Мир выбран ужасно. Люди могут летать в космос, но не знают про интернет кафе. А главный герой тупой имбецил. Работа на 2-2.5
Me terminó encantando apesar de solo ser 50 episodios esperaré con ancias los próximos y espero que esta serie se tenga buaenas críticas ..................................................
Amazing writing quality of which i did not expect It's been 10 months as of now and there have been no new updates, but author is writing 4 books at the same time so if one of those is being worked on, I'll be good Story dev has me wondering what game will be next and hopes that there will be more customers to have more side stories while focusing on the main story I like the design of how laid-back Damian is, how mike? matt? whatever Alex's kids name is how he helped most of the early story characters get into the game and things like that The world background is kinda cliche, but it doesn't really get into it but little tidbits of how before the scourge the tech existed.
Reveal SpoilerNeed...More....Chapters.....Running....Out Of Ideas What To Do....Please....More Chapters! Overall This Novel Is A Rare Genius Idea For A Novel! And Have Different Games Than Black Tech Internet Cafe Tho I Appreciate Both Novels I Rather Read This Because This Has New Games In It.
please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update.
Nooooo why did it stop updatinggggg, author don't do this to meeeeeee 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔ಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥಥ_ಥ
Nice novel and we are waiting for you to continue this beautiful novel ....................................................................................................................
Great want more . keep up the awesome work and don't let anyone bash on it. >iiiiiiiijsnbshsjjjjjjj
It is a hidden gem. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality - 3 Average, there isn't anything special about it besides the fact that the grammar isn't horrible. Updates - 1 No more chapters beyond 50 Story Development - 2 Mostly a complete copy of Black Tech Internet Cafe System. Starts off with a rich person going into shop, buying because the prices are outrageous and that guy experiences the wonder of it and spreads the word of it. Character Design - 1 Firstly, the character is just an attempt Fang Qi stan as he's the "rules are rules" person and becomes the most op in each video games. World Background - 3 It's... good enough for the story. Overall, compared to Black Tech Internet Cafe, it appears as a complete copy while having more eastern ways. Along with that, the story is a bit bland.
Reveal SpoilerVery nice! •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
Interesting, this author seems to be serious about this novel! Just try the 50 chapters and wait for update if you like it. Author should be back within a month? **: Why is there a "translation" quality review for a orginal?
Its really good,Thats all Ehjsnssjsndk ssjdnxj dxnnxkx dndnfkc dncmxjxndmdkxdnd dnckxkdndmdmdkdmdmdkdkddkmdkddidkdndndmdkdkdkddkmddmdmfkkfkfmf
This is a very well written story. After finishing black tech café I need something to fill that void of store owner systems. I can’t wait for more chapters and forward to last as long as black tech café did. Keep up the good work.
I like it alot, although I find the chapters a bit short but its still a great read.........................................................
Honestly there are far to few stories like this like black tech internet cafe and god level store manager etc....................140 characters
plus de chapitre ou plus de sortie de chapitre par jour car 2 tous les 2 a 3 jour c est long et les chapitre son trop court soit vous agrandisse les chapitre ou des sortie tous les jours ou plus de chapitre
I like the premisse of the story but I can't yet say much about the world or the characters. For now I would say that the characters are being quite unreal and are way to accepting. Not even talking about the deus ex Machina moments how he got so many influential people in his shop who are then not asking any relevant questions or telling the public about the effects of the shop. A bit strange but still ok. Now the real question is, is it worth it to continue reading or will you abandon it soon? You have quite a lot of stories on your profile with not so many chapters after all.
Can't wait for more! So amazing! ...........................................................................................................
Noice ...........................................................................................................................................
An Internet Cafe where you can play games that increase your cultivation base plus easy combat experience, so far it is verry good and because games can have mods and they can be made my customers the first games won't just stop being played like black tech internet cafe. Only some slight spelling mistakes.
Reveal SpoilerExp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!Exp!!
I really like this story. I wish I could only put 5 stars on. Please don't leave her. There are very few such stories, especially where there is a minecraft
Nice i like the sorce material and the spin of ive been folowing your content unHoly student u post great stuff good luck Moremore moremore moremore moremore
like this so far just wanna ask about your other fan fic how many of them are dropped because I think most of them but some have to been updated in a while but dont say dropped or anything
I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more give me more....... ............................ ..... ............................................
Очередной раб системы, который не имеет права поступать так как хочет, а вынужден действовать по шаблону. Мир выбран ужасно. Люди могут летать в космос, но не знают про интернет кафе. А главный герой тупой имбецил. Работа на 2-2.5