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this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it
Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.
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very hard to read, all the bad gramma makes it hard to read, please get an editor, I would rather read machine translated novels then your work man, please fix the grammar
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its a good book i like it keep up the good work i just the mc would tame one of the monsters but other wise good. the mc not dumb dumb but still lack knowledge but he try to learn it all
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Grammar is horrible tonthe point im having ton decipher what you arevtrying to convey to the reader. You mix up on and in a lot but somdo most non native english speakers. You use the wrong tense like past presnt and future. Also a lot of basic grammar and sentence structures are incorrect as well please get an editor or use a better app. Google translate could do better. Otherwise the story is ok probably will be like most eastern novels on here but it is your story
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big suggestion, you should put what this is, like fantasy isekai or somethin so people can find it easier overall i think this is a great story and has lots of potential
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this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it
Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.
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Reveal Spoiler very hard to read, all the bad gramma makes it hard to read, please get an editor, I would rather read machine translated novels then your work man, please fix the grammar
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its a good book i like it keep up the good work i just the mc would tame one of the monsters but other wise good. the mc not dumb dumb but still lack knowledge but he try to learn it all
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Grammar is horrible tonthe point im having ton decipher what you arevtrying to convey to the reader. You mix up on and in a lot but somdo most non native english speakers. You use the wrong tense like past presnt and future. Also a lot of basic grammar and sentence structures are incorrect as well please get an editor or use a better app. Google translate could do better. Otherwise the story is ok probably will be like most eastern novels on here but it is your story
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big suggestion, you should put what this is, like fantasy isekai or somethin so people can find it easier overall i think this is a great story and has lots of potential
Grammer needs work but I like😃😃[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] the story so😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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