The insider outsider

Neko is just a normal boy but soon he ends up going to a land that lies beyond the core but really when everyone there looks like the just may eat you alive and when they challenge someone it's just another way of saying one of us is going to die today how will he survive and what will he do when the world crumbles under his feet will he have enough so-called outsider spirit to hold even the world up?

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