The King Of Fighters

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Photosphere

Future Masterpiece and Hidden Gem is an understatement for this novel, let’s go. Writing Quality: Regular. It has several typos here and there, it has forgotten words such as indefinite article but the delivery is fresh, there are a lot of dialogues and paragraphs aren’t that much loaded. Update Stability: No chap for two days so, let’s say average. Story Development: great development in every sense of the word. There are great battles, missions, something to accomplish and an end goal, the perfect recipe for development. Character Design: imI like every single character presented, I don’t dare call myself a Tekken fan but I like it, I don’t know much about KOF or SF characters but I’ve come to like them in this novel with just few chapters. World Background: Proper geographic information delivered, proper weather descriptions, a lot of locations for different character interaction, 5 stars. Now my personal opinion: I absolutely love this novel, if there is something that it is lacking it would be drama but that’s also optional. I love Roxy and Poison so dam much, I hope you give them a better role in the future, many might think that they’re just sluts and that I should be crazy for loving them but not at all. I love how they developed, how they were willing to change their motives, their way of dressing and their way of behaving just to get in his heart, regardless of their initial motives, sht I just love them. I love that you gave every character a proper background or at least didn’t discard it from the original, and many pairings, I’m sad that King has a boyfriend cause I liked her quite a bit but well such is life, I like that you limit the amount of girls that he will get, there’s a lot of variety so he can’t get them all. Just hope you put Lily and Nina from Tekken and I’m happy. Love the fighting scenes, there is actual rivalry, I like that he’s getting subordinates, like him making his own Saibatsu one way or another. I like that he’s not fully OP and that makes it so that fights are interesting. The lemons are scarce but when you write them boe, are you FanHarem’s disciple? That’s the way it should be, not lemon every chap, but a quality and meaningful one every ten or 20 chaps. Girls aren’t easy and don’t just surrender themselves, I mean poison and roxy did but that’s just how they are. I see so much potential in this novel. The only thing I don’t like honestly is that you mixed Kengan, I believe it’s unnecessary, there’s enough story and characters with KOF, Tekken and Naruto. Hope the best and you’ll be getting my stones often. Greetings

LV 13

booty_eater_22

quite an enjoyable little tale. a blonde haired man with too strong a libido, and far too many women to fůck, how will he manage? find out next time on Naruto's Balls Z

LV 5

LewdPaper

I highly recommend this novel!! it has harem,good fighting scene , and *cough**cough* great lewd scenes. Plot and characters are interesting they have unique feel about them..Naruto as a character in the novel not your usual mc pls check this out i rate it 10/10

LV 4

Logan_Sullivan

Like it a lot hope it Continues for a bit this type of naruto is fun to read not brain dead or so edgey that he bacically is a Sauske with a biju instead of sharigan it can be fun but it needs To be balanced out i like it when hes still fun loving and mature enough not to do end of naruto to boruto levels of stupid so in summary hope you keep up the good work

LV 4

Enigmation

I like this one a lot though I might be biased as I like Tekken and played the games in my childhood years. I like the power-balancing the author did here, not too OP but strong enough that Naruto isn't ignored. I wonder how the story will develop further. Thank you author and please continue writing. My advice to you though, would be to slow down the number of fanfics u have though and focus on 2-4 and switch up so u don't feel burned out. Honestly, having so many fanfics seems burdensome.

LV 5

Pedro_Padre

Story's good. Great even. I enjoyed reading it. This version of Naruto is far better than canon Naruto or most fanfic versions of him. Smarter, stronger. Its fun to read. More please.

LV 14

HHKing

It's fun to read like all the author's stories. There's infotainment here that adds more than imagination can. As a casual reader of the source materials being used in this fanfic, I'm not lost or confused about characters or circumstances. So far everything fits good together. Now I've gotta read more.

LV 3

TAYROS_LINK

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LV 4

Kvndrn

Me gustó mucho esta historia, es una lastima que hayan dejado de actualizarla cuando de todas las historias que ha escrito hasta este momento, esta fue mi favorita por mucho pues me encanto el concepto

LV 13

Senior_Black

amazing work at presenting three different world at one single novel.. but it still lack element of surprise as author unnecessary explain character personality which makes it somewhat boring as it otherwise amazing work hope it will continue.

LV 11

Kiips

To begin I really like this story! I think there is a lot of potential in this one. There is not a lot of good fanfic based on figthing game and I am happy to have found one. There are still room for improvement, like with how the characters interact with each other based on there background (not mastered yet) or how intimate scenes build up. But I am confident that I will see the author get better at it.

LV 4

jina535v

good story😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😎😍😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😎😎😋😎😎😍😎😋😎😎😍😍😎😘😎😎😍😘😍😘😍🤨😑😘😮😘😗😮😗🙄🥰🥰😘😗😍😘😊😊😗🥰🥰😗😐😁😘

LV 5

Marchen

I like it. It's fun and intresting. I highly recommend it if you want something fun and relaxing to read. Give it a shot and just see for yourself in the end. But it's very interesting to me.

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lenox2999

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LV 14

Dragonwolf18

I love the story please dont dropped it and continue to do the awesome job .😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😁😁👍😀👍👏😀👍👍😁😁😀🎉..

LV 5

Pedro_Padre

Haven't even started reading this yet but just for the Chun Li cover😏👌, 👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👏 ........................................................

LV 3

KingLeonidas

simply great, always attentive to the author's ff ... creative ideas accompanied by good development the only downside would be the sheer number of novels it has as it will be difficult to focus on just a few stories so updates will fluctuate

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one_punch_op

I love it, keep doing the good work, and good luck in the future development of your story or fanfic. XDXDXDXDXDXDXD XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD