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the only thing that is that is bad is the world background but still a fun novel to read I really like the split personality about the murder and things like that for me its's a really fun novel
I stopped reading at chapter 47, but I just want to know does Apollo ever kill Willow later on in the story or no?
I can describe this novel in 2 words: A chaotic daycare. Yet I still love it all the same
I loved it very much. I didn't like the starting Willow arc but you can just skip to chapter 16 where he takes vengeance on both willow and his mom (she doesn't die but she did get emotionally hurt a lot).
I have been reading for about 3-4 days and am currently at chapter 226. The Writing Quality of this novel is amazing, as I either see no mistakes or my bein auto-corrects it before I can register it as a mistake. Stability of Updates, I guess this is a auto 5-star since when I started there were about 350 chapters. The Story Development (2 star) is where we hit a bump, you had in the first half, but when I got to about chapter 100 everything starting going downward. To be more specific, chapter 100-120 were actually really interesting to me, but then it just spirals into chapters all about fighting and more fighting and more fighting, just to let you know, the general chapters I'm talking about are 130-200, yea all the way to 200, I was literally saying in my head just please leave the Empire and go somewhere else now. For a face-paced story such as this one, it really threw off my motivation to read further, but read further I did. Character design is more of a 3 star to me, I like how none of them are normal and I like that, but it feels like there was more potential in there, you just didn't squeeze it all out. Last, but probably the one with the most potential, is the World Background. I can tell that your world is vast, with many peculiar things scattered all around, but yea, that's it. I don't really know anything else, there is the Empire, the city, the villages, the demons, and the random powerful dudes. You didn't give too much in-depth information on it, so overall, its a 3, tbh would have been a two, but b/c I really do think the world background has a lot of potential, I'll give a 3. Thanks for anyone who has read up to this point, I shall be off.
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Author, i cant- i just cant, its so, so good. Im speechless. At first i just thought the sypnosis was interesting so i thought why not give it a shot and im glad and sad at the same time cuz’ how i have just let such a piece of work stay on my reading lists untouched, and im somehpw happy that i was reading it when a lot of chapters had passed. Lolz
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the story isn't going in any clear direction and the characters are discarded and non-important, they show up once and we get a bit of an info dump on them and they either die or make no impact on the story. the only thing keeping the mc alive is plot armour and some things that are happening make no logical sense. we didn't get a lot of world-building and the one we got is all over the place. last updated: 1 month ago.
This is a very interesting novel. It is essentially told from the point of view of someone (at least slightly) insane and explores a consequence of a time loop scenario in a fantasy world. I have read to chapter 37.
my name is the speech of the day of the day of the day of the day of my life 😍 you can come in the world and you can do it 😜 you are not able get the world of my life and a person who are the most common you are not ready by you in the isa of India and his four and a half of 24 and your own and the forest has a very good news of India and a half day and I have a year and a good wishes to you and a family omas ppppp
Mommy I am going back 🔙 yeah I'm going home now and then we will be there 😊 yea that's cool lol but it would make you happy 😊 we have been doing this for your Mom said you can come to me
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Author San!!! u have completely lost me this time. Isn't this the prime example of stupidity and forced plot that he is trying to kill everyone else but doesn't even spare a glance to willow...i mean the original hate and resentment towards willow should have been WAYYYYYY more than any random stranger...i can't figure this out someone plzzz help me
this novel is amazing and the character is to my liking generally not his childish side more like his murderous side I would recommend this to people who like murderous mc's
this is an interesting and great story to read. it just catches you off guard with the whole split personality thing because whe reading the synopsis you wouldn't think that he would go crazy. But it still is a great read.
Here the review from me, I did read this before but only few chapters. It's quite good..😎👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻
Spoil me please, does willow die or fall off the novel? Character kind of grew on me so it would be sad to see her go. .....,...............
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Other than some things that don't make sense imo - (spoilers) - like willow accepting Apollo just because he called her mommy going so far to even cry? like tf and then Apollo is shown as a "dumb"-ish kid but talks about maya being proud of herself which is way above the intelligence he has shown earlier while not suiting his personality
I just got past chapter 82 when does Layla die or at least go away so that our mc can get that shadow step technique?I really want Layla dead she is scary but my annoyance definitely outweighs her scaryiness by another so he has to die
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One of the best fighting scene's author i've read, but it only has fights, very slowstory development, the adult version of the MC don't develop in the story, and when we finaly think we will understand the mystery the MC revert back to a child, is getting old, i'm in the 162 and almost dropping even tho i like the fights, but too much is too much
this is just waht i think because i dont like the good side, bad side personality mc has (filler skip this))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I think this story is great because of how 'wholesome' it is. Definitely recommend it to everyone. I also love how simple it is yet it is very entertaining.
really good novel, a real hidden gem, must read!!!! ismtfoeb3urlsidbd9dhmdpfifbfkf9fpdk3ula9xufjdlr9dhdndodnfkdigdnsozushdmdodifhfbdkd8
This deserve to be converted to an anime, reading is not enough for full enjoyment. I can imagine his crazy smile, bokken that never leaves his side, his psychotic but innocent tendencies
Im just here to give this a 5 star that it is cuz author rated this a 1 star which completely dropped the ratings significantly. I really hope u don’t drop this
Description, the first thing is that he is a nice hero who got mad at stupidity and naivety, and by coincidence of the legendary (stupid) the assassin who tried to kill him of course would be a beautiful woman and so after he got mad from repeated killing attempts, he considered her his mother, yes his mother (No, you are wrong not because she is a beautiful woman only because he went crazy if He was a man who would be considered by his mother as the important thing) Of course, in combat, he becomes an unparalleled genius as is the case in other novels, but in the rest of the cases I am just a laughing idiot
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I give it a 5 star since a good novel But Please .. make it less suffering .. The MC always get a tragic event .. I'm in 54 now and I think I stop Reading it if .. it keeps like that. . Seriously though are u perhaps having also tragic life there 😰
aUthor, YoU cLeaRy DOn'T unDeRstAnD sWoRdsMeN wHy WoUlD tHey LaUgH? Hey, author here. As of now, I have written 45 chapters, though they haven't all been posted. I have been having a lot of fun writing and even editing (which is normally a nightmare!). As such, it feels like I'm going against myself with this one-star review, but whatever, lol. Now, can I promise a perfect story? No, I do think there are some flaws in a multitude of areas, but it is one I have confidence in. So what is the plot? At first glance, this may seem like RE: zero dark version, but it's not that. The main character, Apollo, only dies repeatedly at the start. From there, he develops split personalities. One is a silly innocent child, and the other a psychotic murderer. His initial goal is revenge, but he does not know who exactly betrayed him. The first major story arc will be centered around this. The reason why I gave this novel the Evil Mc tag is because of how Apollo wishes to solve problems. He hates the world he lives in. For him, his solution was to destroy it. Apollo will experience what morals are and tends to solve his problems through mass murder. As for more details, they are spoilers, at least in my opinion. If I am being honest, I think writing this book is bad for my mental health, lol. Going through so many murders and freakouts can cause subtle changes to my mind. But, it's too fun to stop now. Hope you enjoy!
the only thing that is that is bad is the world background but still a fun novel to read I really like the split personality about the murder and things like that for me its's a really fun novel
I stopped reading at chapter 47, but I just want to know does Apollo ever kill Willow later on in the story or no?
I can describe this novel in 2 words: A chaotic daycare. Yet I still love it all the same
I loved it very much. I didn't like the starting Willow arc but you can just skip to chapter 16 where he takes vengeance on both willow and his mom (she doesn't die but she did get emotionally hurt a lot).
I have been reading for about 3-4 days and am currently at chapter 226. The Writing Quality of this novel is amazing, as I either see no mistakes or my bein auto-corrects it before I can register it as a mistake. Stability of Updates, I guess this is a auto 5-star since when I started there were about 350 chapters. The Story Development (2 star) is where we hit a bump, you had in the first half, but when I got to about chapter 100 everything starting going downward. To be more specific, chapter 100-120 were actually really interesting to me, but then it just spirals into chapters all about fighting and more fighting and more fighting, just to let you know, the general chapters I'm talking about are 130-200, yea all the way to 200, I was literally saying in my head just please leave the Empire and go somewhere else now. For a face-paced story such as this one, it really threw off my motivation to read further, but read further I did. Character design is more of a 3 star to me, I like how none of them are normal and I like that, but it feels like there was more potential in there, you just didn't squeeze it all out. Last, but probably the one with the most potential, is the World Background. I can tell that your world is vast, with many peculiar things scattered all around, but yea, that's it. I don't really know anything else, there is the Empire, the city, the villages, the demons, and the random powerful dudes. You didn't give too much in-depth information on it, so overall, its a 3, tbh would have been a two, but b/c I really do think the world background has a lot of potential, I'll give a 3. Thanks for anyone who has read up to this point, I shall be off.
Reveal Spoiler Author, i cant- i just cant, its so, so good. Im speechless. At first i just thought the sypnosis was interesting so i thought why not give it a shot and im glad and sad at the same time cuz’ how i have just let such a piece of work stay on my reading lists untouched, and im somehpw happy that i was reading it when a lot of chapters had passed. Lolz
bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
the story isn't going in any clear direction and the characters are discarded and non-important, they show up once and we get a bit of an info dump on them and they either die or make no impact on the story. the only thing keeping the mc alive is plot armour and some things that are happening make no logical sense. we didn't get a lot of world-building and the one we got is all over the place. last updated: 1 month ago.
This is a very interesting novel. It is essentially told from the point of view of someone (at least slightly) insane and explores a consequence of a time loop scenario in a fantasy world. I have read to chapter 37.
my name is the speech of the day of the day of the day of the day of my life 😍 you can come in the world and you can do it 😜 you are not able get the world of my life and a person who are the most common you are not ready by you in the isa of India and his four and a half of 24 and your own and the forest has a very good news of India and a half day and I have a year and a good wishes to you and a family omas ppppp
Mommy I am going back 🔙 yeah I'm going home now and then we will be there 😊 yea that's cool lol but it would make you happy 😊 we have been doing this for your Mom said you can come to me
Reveal Spoiler Author San!!! u have completely lost me this time. Isn't this the prime example of stupidity and forced plot that he is trying to kill everyone else but doesn't even spare a glance to willow...i mean the original hate and resentment towards willow should have been WAYYYYYY more than any random stranger...i can't figure this out someone plzzz help me
this novel is amazing and the character is to my liking generally not his childish side more like his murderous side I would recommend this to people who like murderous mc's
this is an interesting and great story to read. it just catches you off guard with the whole split personality thing because whe reading the synopsis you wouldn't think that he would go crazy. But it still is a great read.
Here the review from me, I did read this before but only few chapters. It's quite good..😎👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻
Spoil me please, does willow die or fall off the novel? Character kind of grew on me so it would be sad to see her go. .....,...............
Reveal Spoiler Other than some things that don't make sense imo - (spoilers) - like willow accepting Apollo just because he called her mommy going so far to even cry? like tf and then Apollo is shown as a "dumb"-ish kid but talks about maya being proud of herself which is way above the intelligence he has shown earlier while not suiting his personality
I just got past chapter 82 when does Layla die or at least go away so that our mc can get that shadow step technique?I really want Layla dead she is scary but my annoyance definitely outweighs her scaryiness by another so he has to die
Reveal Spoiler One of the best fighting scene's author i've read, but it only has fights, very slowstory development, the adult version of the MC don't develop in the story, and when we finaly think we will understand the mystery the MC revert back to a child, is getting old, i'm in the 162 and almost dropping even tho i like the fights, but too much is too much
this is just waht i think because i dont like the good side, bad side personality mc has (filler skip this))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I think this story is great because of how 'wholesome' it is. Definitely recommend it to everyone. I also love how simple it is yet it is very entertaining.
really good novel, a real hidden gem, must read!!!! ismtfoeb3urlsidbd9dhmdpfifbfkf9fpdk3ula9xufjdlr9dhdndodnfkdigdnsozushdmdodifhfbdkd8
This deserve to be converted to an anime, reading is not enough for full enjoyment. I can imagine his crazy smile, bokken that never leaves his side, his psychotic but innocent tendencies
Im just here to give this a 5 star that it is cuz author rated this a 1 star which completely dropped the ratings significantly. I really hope u don’t drop this
Description, the first thing is that he is a nice hero who got mad at stupidity and naivety, and by coincidence of the legendary (stupid) the assassin who tried to kill him of course would be a beautiful woman and so after he got mad from repeated killing attempts, he considered her his mother, yes his mother (No, you are wrong not because she is a beautiful woman only because he went crazy if He was a man who would be considered by his mother as the important thing) Of course, in combat, he becomes an unparalleled genius as is the case in other novels, but in the rest of the cases I am just a laughing idiot
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Reveal Spoiler I give it a 5 star since a good novel But Please .. make it less suffering .. The MC always get a tragic event .. I'm in 54 now and I think I stop Reading it if .. it keeps like that. . Seriously though are u perhaps having also tragic life there 😰
aUthor, YoU cLeaRy DOn'T unDeRstAnD sWoRdsMeN wHy WoUlD tHey LaUgH? Hey, author here. As of now, I have written 45 chapters, though they haven't all been posted. I have been having a lot of fun writing and even editing (which is normally a nightmare!). As such, it feels like I'm going against myself with this one-star review, but whatever, lol. Now, can I promise a perfect story? No, I do think there are some flaws in a multitude of areas, but it is one I have confidence in. So what is the plot? At first glance, this may seem like RE: zero dark version, but it's not that. The main character, Apollo, only dies repeatedly at the start. From there, he develops split personalities. One is a silly innocent child, and the other a psychotic murderer. His initial goal is revenge, but he does not know who exactly betrayed him. The first major story arc will be centered around this. The reason why I gave this novel the Evil Mc tag is because of how Apollo wishes to solve problems. He hates the world he lives in. For him, his solution was to destroy it. Apollo will experience what morals are and tends to solve his problems through mass murder. As for more details, they are spoilers, at least in my opinion. If I am being honest, I think writing this book is bad for my mental health, lol. Going through so many murders and freakouts can cause subtle changes to my mind. But, it's too fun to stop now. Hope you enjoy!