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When are you going to Update again itβs been weeks Iβm looking forward to the next issue of the story but the way youβre going you seem to only do one update a year at most please update again soon this is a good story and I want to see it continue good job on picking the powers by the way οΏΌ
I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia.
Nice story. Good premise Hope you give shirou a true magic. Preferably the fourth magic or the first magic. If i remember well fourth nagic is about the manipulation of concepts....... ...............................................................................................................................................................
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Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...
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It has potential really if you can put in more thought into story and take it's a bit seriously. I love the plot and idea and Don't drop it if u can u can make op mc with big-time skip and go straight for the boss but don't drop this. it's a waste if u leave it halfway through
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First few chapters are enough to hype me up for more. please dont be too tired to update this story. Guess I better meet character requirements. sooo...done!
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Just posting this here to boost the rating and so that people can ask me questions if they have them. This novel is just something I do in my free time and is not my main one. The MC is going to be majorly OP and I am essentially using this to correct things I did not like in the Fate series so if you are here for a dark story or any major struggles this is not for you. It is going to be more about fun and the MC enjoying his second life.
what I just got to read this book and now I come to find out that you are going to flip this book what is wrong with you dont do that bring it back please
Awesome don't drop bring back ππππππππππππππππππππππππππ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπππππ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπππππππbring it back please
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When are you going to Update again itβs been weeks Iβm looking forward to the next issue of the story but the way youβre going you seem to only do one update a year at most please update again soon this is a good story and I want to see it continue good job on picking the powers by the way οΏΌ
I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia. I can't wait to see Arturia.
Nice story. Good premise Hope you give shirou a true magic. Preferably the fourth magic or the first magic. If i remember well fourth nagic is about the manipulation of concepts....... ...............................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...
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It has potential really if you can put in more thought into story and take it's a bit seriously. I love the plot and idea and Don't drop it if u can u can make op mc with big-time skip and go straight for the boss but don't drop this. it's a waste if u leave it halfway through
More more more more more more more more more more more more more moreππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπ₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³
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Reveal Spoiler Great full support from me..... Don't drop this novel Great full support from me..... Don't drop this novel Great full support from me..... Don't drop this novel Great full support from me..... Don't drop this novel
First few chapters are enough to hype me up for more. please dont be too tired to update this story. Guess I better meet character requirements. sooo...done!
Nice....................................,............................ Nice....................................,............... Nice....................................,............... Nice....................................,...............
Just posting this here to boost the rating and so that people can ask me questions if they have them. This novel is just something I do in my free time and is not my main one. The MC is going to be majorly OP and I am essentially using this to correct things I did not like in the Fate series so if you are here for a dark story or any major struggles this is not for you. It is going to be more about fun and the MC enjoying his second life.
what I just got to read this book and now I come to find out that you are going to flip this book what is wrong with you dont do that bring it back please