Peace12345
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Peace12345: So Izuku has not learned full cowling yet? Then was all his training before for nothing?
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C12
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C12
The_Auditor: I am doing what interests me the most at the moment since i don't hsve much free time
Nine Tailed System · C188
The_Auditor: You didn't see Grimskull' Dungeon B, every singe monster as the hp of a mini boss
Bless this Wonderful World with a Void Highlord · C15
Peace12345: What the hell this dungeon is a cheat, there is essentially no way to beat it because the boss has to be OP.
Bless this Wonderful World with a Void Highlord · C16
Bless this Wonderful World with a Void Highlord · C16
Peace12345: If he falls for something like this when he knows she is a Luthor I will lose all respect for him, he should turn it around so that she takes it instead or it has no effect on him. He is basically a low god at this point if he is still vulnerable to this stuff he is a weakling and an idiot.
DC Anime System · C25
Amdjed16: If the mc fall for this trick with his power that will be stupid
DC Anime System · C25
Apophis_: Make Mc realize the problem but pretending he did not see there is perfect hehehe
DC Anime System · C25
DC Anime System · C25
Peace12345: I thought you were doing a rewrite of Billy's story? Although I am looking forward to the bleach one, not many good fanfics about that.
Nine Tailed System · C188
Nine Tailed System · C188
Peace12345: You should concentrate on Itsuki but also have chapters from his girls points of view.
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
theyasser: It would be nice to look at itsuki's actions from the perspective of others
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Moustachio: More POVs. Be careful about the fillers arc, their stories are a true mess. The movies too sadly.
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
fucc: i think you should use different characters pov to see what they think about Itsuki does think and what he doing but the story should mostly be about Itsuki
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Obito_Tobi: make it 80% POV for Itsuki and the 20% for others mainly Ichigo because of him being the first protagonist before Itsuki came so he also play a role in everything as he and his friends was targeted by almost all the enemies
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Cooper_Gang: Thanks for the chapter
It would to nice to have POV of other characters like Itsuki's friends, lovers Ichigo's group. Maybe also what Urahara thinks of Itsuki. However, the POV shouldn't be a rewrite of the plot but in another person's perpestive. For example, another chapter of Itsuki fighting with Yamamoto but written in Soi Fon's perpective. Don't know if that makes sense 😅.Rebirth in Bleach · C70
purer: dont concentrate only on itsuki use other perspectives as well everyone does it, it makes the book bigger and more fun
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
swordkill: My suggestion is, since Itsuki is our MC, make sure you give him at least 80 % of the story time. Remaining time you can divide to express other POV on our MC's doings or their own plot.
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Kayox23: It would be good if we have the POV of other people like how Team Ichigo think about Itsuki or other things
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Rebirth in Bleach · C70
Peace12345: Nice and since Izuku has actually been training he should be strong enough to withstand more of All Mights power and learn to put it to use before the entrance exam.
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C11
DarkApolonir: Midoriya Will have more time to adjust to the one for all, 10 more months to do it he Will be more powerful, make him clean the bleach with all might
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C11
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C11
Peace12345: Oh god this dungeon sounds broken!!! People actually play that?
Bless this Wonderful World with a Void Highlord · C15
Bless this Wonderful World with a Void Highlord · C15
Peace12345: Were those portals origionally exploitable? I mean the goddess from the original could not find Asora so is his a downgraded version?
God succession system · C199
God succession system · C199
The_Auditor: Too late, already doing chapter 28
You can't KILL me · C42
