The owl door of Hampshire

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Theothegiant

Giving myself the best review cause why not? Gotta be your biggest fan in this line of things XD. For the writing quality I tried my best to give that olden days vibe with speeches and haiku's at the beginning of almost every chapter hinting to deeper parts of the story! I update when I can but I mostly do it on saturdays sometimes sundays, for story development, I've been told that my pacing is always good and well suited to the story so much to the point that I believe them and I'm confident about it, will you think different? World background huh? The lore runs deep in the school itself ((THE REST OF THE COMMENT WILL BE MINOR SPOILERS)): Like the history of the founders and the history of the headmaster how it all came to be and how he lived on for over 100 years it might not be what you think, Who created the owl door? Who runs it? Who keeps all it's secrets? I guess you can only find out by reading :)

LV 3

MrFay

the description, the introduction and the story telling is just mindblowing i have never seen such story building tbvh, there were some kind of minor like so minor grammatical mistakes throughout the story but it never made reading the story any difficult i enjoyed reading it and now i want more of ot T.T tbh i really love your pokemon rise but this one hits different.

LV 11

Somebody6666

Ah, like the way you describe the charas in your story. I imagine them being such beautiful creatures 🥹🥹🥹❤️❤️❤️ i wanna be them

LV 3

de_writer

Really interesting story with a mysterious vibe. I quite like the world-building and plot, although some of the descriptions could use some work. Otherwise really great story author

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Patience_Agboola

Wow this book is good and so interesting. Continue your good work

LV 10

NispedanaSan

This was a fun read. Very anime-ish. If you like those fantasy stories in academy settings, give this a try!

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1stDaoistOfReading

Everything about this book isn't that bad to begin with the only reason its this low is because of stability of updates, character design and writing quality, look my problem is the protagonists lack of care after his first 'murder' and he seems too relaxed after being the cause of someone's death, all In all though the way you ended the chapter with the students death was beautiful, it got me wondering if there was a plot twist of did he really die! Thanks for the story Author Nim

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SeraphWedd

Great work author, just keep those chapters coming! 😎👍👍👍👍👍

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ThreyaMidnight

I love how the first chapter immediately ended with a bang! That left a good impression on me. However, I suggest the author should edit the next chapters since there were some punctuation errors, capitalization mistakes, lack or excess spaces, et cetera. Overall, I like the premise of your story! I think it has lots of potential if you worked on the points that needed to be fixed. I hope to read more from you, dear Author!

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Crown_Nyx

Great novel, love the setting in a mystery place fille with unknown, in general it will be a fun read I suggest it, the writing is great and the story building slowly showing the real world!

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SeraphWedd

Hmm... Another great work from author! Definitely something worth keeping in my library~!Keep up the good work! And more chapters~! 😁🤣

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NewbieJimjim

The story is very thrilling and exciting. it also have a good writing and original characters that will keep you on the edge of your seat. Highly recommended!