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Write a reviewa really good story shame it hasn't been updated for 5 months ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I searched high and low, for some nice novel in the "Dungeon" category. Im not interested in Dungeon pillaging, more like the whole building and management what is the more interesting part. In this novel I think, I just found the perfect balance between adventuring, action, building and management. Great work!
Honestly, other than the slightly interesting idea of a pocket dungeon, this story is very very bad all around. From screaming pansy MC too stupid to wipe **** off his hands, to massive info dump right out the gates, to word padding contextually worthless history lessons, pointless redshirting, a Deus-ex asspull, and now tortuous pedophilia?!?!! Its like your building a cabin out of ****!!!
Downgraded protagonist with forced death (bad starting location and useless protection) and change of mindset (dominance of the 12yo mind instead of the selected *****). Forced children romance with a 11yo raped girl. Hidden outsiders getting to curious about a random slum child instead of keeping an eye on the town main players, thus forcing the discovery of some of his abilities if not his identity.
Reveal Spoilerfirst 7 chapters were good and interesting then pure bull**** story dont know why u took that route but well just disappointing 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
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The idea of a pocket dungeon was interesting but the MC at the start was utter trash then the author made it worse by killing him and putting him into a body of a child with the kids memories so now he is two different people and he even has baggage,some girl or something. This novel is garbage and you shouldnt waste your time.
a really good story shame it hasn't been updated for 5 months ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I searched high and low, for some nice novel in the "Dungeon" category. Im not interested in Dungeon pillaging, more like the whole building and management what is the more interesting part. In this novel I think, I just found the perfect balance between adventuring, action, building and management. Great work!
Honestly, other than the slightly interesting idea of a pocket dungeon, this story is very very bad all around. From screaming pansy MC too stupid to wipe **** off his hands, to massive info dump right out the gates, to word padding contextually worthless history lessons, pointless redshirting, a Deus-ex asspull, and now tortuous pedophilia?!?!! Its like your building a cabin out of ****!!!
Downgraded protagonist with forced death (bad starting location and useless protection) and change of mindset (dominance of the 12yo mind instead of the selected *****). Forced children romance with a 11yo raped girl. Hidden outsiders getting to curious about a random slum child instead of keeping an eye on the town main players, thus forcing the discovery of some of his abilities if not his identity.
Reveal Spoilerfirst 7 chapters were good and interesting then pure bull**** story dont know why u took that route but well just disappointing 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
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The idea of a pocket dungeon was interesting but the MC at the start was utter trash then the author made it worse by killing him and putting him into a body of a child with the kids memories so now he is two different people and he even has baggage,some girl or something. This novel is garbage and you shouldnt waste your time.