The promise of a dead man (DROPPED)

As his life fades away from his body he leaves her a promise that he intends to fulfill even after death.

"Do you wish to follow through with your promise?"

"I dont know where I am or who you are lady but I'm guessing you're god"

"I go by many names but my most common name is god, but that is not important child. Your promise with the girl do you wish to follow through with it?"

"Damn right I will! Also who're you calling "child" I'll have you know that I died at the age of 63!"

and so his life begins anew...

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Heyyo just gonna write down here that I dropped this idea (much wow dropping a 2 chapter novel). so if there're people that found this novel interesting (which i highly doubt btw) then sry but I'm gonna drop this. If i do pick up the story again it will be in a different work with a different title and synopsis.
Right now just gonna TRY, emphasis on the try part, to stick to one story and finish it, its titled "A killer cant change" I'm new to this webnovel writing thing so i got 0 idea on how to delete a novel nor do i know if there's a way to put in a status(dropped, on-going, completed and etc.)

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Heyyo! first time writer here so you're probably gonna see alot of grammar mistakes or typos.

(If you watch WorstPremadeEver on YT then im at like Jonk level literacy) :)

I welcome any sorts of criticism be it harsh or soft so long its constructive i will take it all just so i can improve my writing skills.

Really hope you guys enjoy this series as much as i do(in my head atleast)

once i get even better at writing then i'll probably write another novel idea which i've been keeping shelved in my head for 2 years now. Buuuuut this isnt gonna happen any time soon since i gotta get better first.

So once again I hope you guys enjoy this and i will be really thankful if any of you can point out on some typos or grammar mistakes (especially the commas and periods since i make mistakes with those 2 alot) AND criticism let me have it.