The Quantum Manipulator

Not gonna lie, it was a great power concept. It was a bit scuffed around the 1-16 chapters but the author fixed his writings and actually makes great quality story. The characters have unique personalities and backgrounds. I have to rate this a solid 7/10, it was an enjoyable read, however there are some moments which I found absolutely irrelevant. The author needs to work on his writing quality, his grammars especially, his vocabularies and choices of words are splendidly used, no comment there. I like the MC's character, he is prideful yet isn't arrogant, he is skillful yet he isn't so skillful that it ruins the whole plot, he is smart as a truck which I most found fancy in this novel. I absolutely love how the author portrays MC's schemes. I see this as an absolute potential, good luck author!

LV 11

Empzze

First off, great work author, interesting storyline with well-written chapters, I just started reading and at first, I thought since it wasn't a genre I was familiar with, it was going to be difficult to read but it wasn't. The synopsis is great too, short but captivating, it was able to make me wonder about who Killigan Everheart is. In all, this story definitely has great potential. keep up the good work.

LV 14

NixOrtikal

Grammar mistakes aside, the writer does his best to gain the reader's attention with an interesting opening. Also shows the ability to carry this story with great world building, continue to write and keep up the good work.

LV 4

OnizukaShinu

Shameless author review! Hey! I.. got nothing to say personally. Just read it and enjoy this random thing a I’ve made up. I do hope to inquire thy assistance to criticize my work to help me improve in writing! Thanks!

Writing quality 5/10, I kinda understand since you're still an immature writer, so I'll give this a pass. Update stability 3/10, Consistent but slow... 1 chapter a day isn't enough, personally. Story development 5/10, kinda rushed but still in an ok range. Character design 10/10, described perfectly perhaps a little too much showing instead of telling, but it doesn't bothers me. World building is amazingly done 100/10, creative.. that's all I'm gonna add.

LV 11

Rayne_Rue

Great chapters, Love the plot. The character design was designed well and I loved the characters, especially the Ml. Updating stability is excellent as well, I really did love to recommend this book and the author should work on some editing but apart from that I really loved reading the first 6 chapters, great work author....