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Great story bro... just wish he didn't lose his memories. Ight I even voted with my POWAH STONES*Evil thunder noise in background* well thanks and tc hoomans!
it sucks, it took the memory of the reincarnated mc, a very bad idea, there is no reason to take the memory, if I didn’t want him to know the plot, it was just to make him a dog in his own world, useless reincarnation.
Bad idea to take memories off. like if you want him not to remember anything why reincarnate? just make him of the danmachi world. Like, god saw the kid in coffin and he revives him with powers. That's all. why bother all this? i was just waiting for him to get his memories back and play well. But, MC is scared to go to dungeon. Like What?
Underatted FanFic. Please Continue. A Good Read. Interesting backstory of MC. Grammar and spelling 👌. Please Continue......................
I haven't read this and I probably won't because there isn't any information in the synapse about what this story is about. You need a little bit of info to get readers attention.
Grammar:Good Background:👌 Character Development:Need more chapters but pretty good so far Some people are batching about MC loosing his memory saying just make him an oc in danmachi will be better(I do t agree) and being scare of going in dungeon(imagine going to another world where you don't have memory of and there are a place with monster that have a high chance of kill you would you go in?of course not you need to be really desperate or decentat fighting)but don't mind them and keep up the good work
Uh huh. Underrated Danmachi FanFic. A bit of a downer about MC's memories but overall it's all ok. By the way, does MC look like Rimuru? Thanks
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Seemed kinda interesting until it turned out that the MC also *acts* like a child.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
wh it's good but I dropped it cuz the mc is kinda naive way too naive he showed his status the the logic familiar Sebastians n Susan's status's to aid just like that ye he likes her but still
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I had high hopes about this fanfic but in the end it's onr of many and very forgettable, the only good thing about this is the writing of the author. A personal opinión: don't make the characters to Op at the beggining of the story it make it boring
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The Idea has potential Noja, however it wasnt executed very well. From the very start everything is happening at the same time not giving any chance for the events to unfold before something new and uncomplete comes in, for example his past is suddenly given however the MC has no character at all before this happens and it does literary nothing besides saying that he has a "title" or even the interactions between the characters, they have no reason shown in why they act like they do towards the mc and even then they have short sections, the thing that was done well in those however is that the author managed to show that those side characters do care about the mc in a way I have never seen to be honest, it might be unique to the author here or its just me, who knows Noja. So I think that this has potential, just needs proper preparation for it to be great Noja. My advice would be to give it space, since the like I said earlier the idea is interesting but its just not done correctly Noja. Before he was reincarnated we were seen that the MC was quite shameless and brave, but due to the memory loss the MC became a blank state again with literary no character, while am at chapter 8 and you may have added him a character later on I dont really want to read more with how clustered it was at the start.
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