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Nomed_Forcraziness

.................................................. I really like it. .... that's very good. .. I won't say much because it will be a spoiler to the others thank you for your hard work hoping for more in the future

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ZOA
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This novel has much potential in it. I loved how it is written [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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sagorika_adhikari

I think it is a gem to read through but author please update it regularly. Other than that I have no complains. Character & plotline are bang on. All the best.

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SleepyKola

Bravo! This author success in creating such an epic work! the tension and atmosphere from just reading makes me hold my breathe until i didn't realize i finish that chapter. Good work author! keep updating!

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Amy_Reason

The story is very interesting. The plot is so mysterious like we want to read more to find out.This story kinda giving me harry Potter vibe. Waiting for next chapter, good luck

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TheSuccessor

Simple words. Exciting. This book holds you so deep, it increases suspense by the moment. I read three chapters thinking I was watching a movie. It's so professional and amazing, this book should've been published a long time ago by HarperCollins or someplace

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Glimmy

Okay ,now this book is totally awesome !! Like the drama and suspence is really thrilling ,you can't help but be on tenterhooks while holding your breath . Don't see much of grammatical error and tense misuse ,though would have preferred if the author had moved the character and phonetics to an auxiliary chapter or beginning cause it disrupted the flow of the story nevertheless ,the story is one of a kind ,I totally love it . Wish for more updates though, regular should do the charm . Well ,thumbs up to you author, you out did a great job .

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StarySky96

Hi.. if your are a fan of Harry Potter and Percy Jackson you will definitely like it . The magic , family secrets , fighting monsters and some sweet love .All the elements are there in the story . surely it's gonna be a rollercoaster ride . One thing the author has written and edited liked a professional . please give a try you will not be disappointed

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shortcke

OMG!!!! WOULD totally read it. The sypnosis makes it so interesting , secrets and monsters are the best part. Totally recommended this book.

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The_Procrastinator

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Adam_A

Really good novel with great charcter development and story, highly recommend it and read it now.Really good novel with great charcter development and story, highly recommend it and read it now.

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Qween_Amanda

The first chapter is enough to hook you in. It's a good book and it's so amazing Wow wow wowo wow Keep up the good work and continge being amazing . . . . Wowww

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EXceL
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I like the writing style, I might steal it hehe... I already stole so many writing styles but never used them OOF got of topic. Till the chapter I have read the story line is good. I can't say much for now.

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Crazy_Beast

Love the story until chapter five, and looking for moooar. The first chapter is interesting enough for anyone to hook up. The presentation is great along with the plot. Loving the story this far, and waiting for what happens with Allen.

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mynightskies92

Wow! This is truly an amazing read! The setting, the intrigue, the suspense! Its all top top notch. I just want the story to continue on and unravel all its dark secrets. Added to library! Update update update good author. I'm officially a fan of The Schatten Chronicles.!

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Noc_Tristan222

This is an amazing made story, well not yet fully developed story though. 4 star for that.The introduction just makes people wanna know the details of the story.5 star for the quality. It's so alluring and interesting. The character is also 5 star and the background is really nice! so 5 star! Maybe sometime I might be willing to read the rest of the story! I love it and would really recommend it to others. No fully spoilers here but I'll mark it as a spoiler.

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meixiaolian

I like the way you write since itsss so detailed and also I like Raiden. <3 <3 I also like the named of the academy, soooo unique. Keep writing :))

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Oemar_danoes

The storyline is tremendous! It's a legit fantasy book & would be perfectly loved by the readers. I am considering it 5 stars to show my fundamental underpinning to the dear author!

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ShadowPrincess96

The storyline is epic! It's a legit fantasy book & would be perfectly loved by the readers. I am rating it 5 star to show my initial support to dear author! Keep it up❤️❤️

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ayaneisme

The story is pretty interesting, and the presentation of it is done very well. My only complaint is that you use single quotations for speech, which was confusing at first as some people use single quotes for thought. Other then that, well done!

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bibiyenini

Perfect! The fantasy romance book is lit! Gotta have some chills while reading this, because it felt like real! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for all fantasy readers!

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Jwcwwd

This is a good book. Gotta admit that this book is way lot better than any other books I've read like for real. I mean the character designs and the world background I mean everything is PERFECTO!!!

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Nalced11

It’s super interesting and I can’t wait to figure out what happens next! No noticeable typos but a few words that seem a bit out of place though they were very easy to look over lol. Overall I really liked it <3

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Bodia_N

The setting of this story gives a feeling of mystery. As the reader, it is up to you to find out why there holds dark secrets in the novel's world.

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Amaira_Knight

really like the story so far.It made feel as if I'm experiencing it own my own. Waiting for author to release more chapters as soon as possible.

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nourhaffar3112

Even though your story is short, I am sure it is still ongoing and unfinished. The title makes it look so appealing and the contents really are so. You are a skilled writer and I hope you improve even more! Good luck with your future in writing!!

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FST
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I love the premise of this story so far and i really hope that more chapters get released soon. I am very curious which direction the story will take in the future.

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merthur2020

There's always something so intriguing when a character enters a new phase in his life and that's what happened here. The intro to the next chapter pulls one to the world the author created. I'm looking forward to more chapters 🙂

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Ibisen

The wording and atmosphere pulls you in right away. I would love to see where the story goes. It's full of mystique and intrigue just two chapters in. Keep it up!

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Shadow_Hunter0327

I loved how you introduced the story. I love the story plot and can't wait till you update more! The only thing i would advise checking grammar. Otherwise it looks really good

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Nomed_Forcraziness

.................................................. I really like it. .... that's very good. .. I won't say much because it will be a spoiler to the others thank you for your hard work hoping for more in the future

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ZOA
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This novel has much potential in it. I loved how it is written [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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sagorika_adhikari

I think it is a gem to read through but author please update it regularly. Other than that I have no complains. Character & plotline are bang on. All the best.

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SleepyKola

Bravo! This author success in creating such an epic work! the tension and atmosphere from just reading makes me hold my breathe until i didn't realize i finish that chapter. Good work author! keep updating!

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Amy_Reason

The story is very interesting. The plot is so mysterious like we want to read more to find out.This story kinda giving me harry Potter vibe. Waiting for next chapter, good luck

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TheSuccessor

Simple words. Exciting. This book holds you so deep, it increases suspense by the moment. I read three chapters thinking I was watching a movie. It's so professional and amazing, this book should've been published a long time ago by HarperCollins or someplace

3yr
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Glimmy

Okay ,now this book is totally awesome !! Like the drama and suspence is really thrilling ,you can't help but be on tenterhooks while holding your breath . Don't see much of grammatical error and tense misuse ,though would have preferred if the author had moved the character and phonetics to an auxiliary chapter or beginning cause it disrupted the flow of the story nevertheless ,the story is one of a kind ,I totally love it . Wish for more updates though, regular should do the charm . Well ,thumbs up to you author, you out did a great job .

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StarySky96

Hi.. if your are a fan of Harry Potter and Percy Jackson you will definitely like it . The magic , family secrets , fighting monsters and some sweet love .All the elements are there in the story . surely it's gonna be a rollercoaster ride . One thing the author has written and edited liked a professional . please give a try you will not be disappointed

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shortcke

OMG!!!! WOULD totally read it. The sypnosis makes it so interesting , secrets and monsters are the best part. Totally recommended this book.

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The_Procrastinator

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Adam_A

Really good novel with great charcter development and story, highly recommend it and read it now.Really good novel with great charcter development and story, highly recommend it and read it now.

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Qween_Amanda

The first chapter is enough to hook you in. It's a good book and it's so amazing Wow wow wowo wow Keep up the good work and continge being amazing . . . . Wowww

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EXceL
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I like the writing style, I might steal it hehe... I already stole so many writing styles but never used them OOF got of topic. Till the chapter I have read the story line is good. I can't say much for now.

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Crazy_Beast

Love the story until chapter five, and looking for moooar. The first chapter is interesting enough for anyone to hook up. The presentation is great along with the plot. Loving the story this far, and waiting for what happens with Allen.

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mynightskies92

Wow! This is truly an amazing read! The setting, the intrigue, the suspense! Its all top top notch. I just want the story to continue on and unravel all its dark secrets. Added to library! Update update update good author. I'm officially a fan of The Schatten Chronicles.!

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Noc_Tristan222

This is an amazing made story, well not yet fully developed story though. 4 star for that.The introduction just makes people wanna know the details of the story.5 star for the quality. It's so alluring and interesting. The character is also 5 star and the background is really nice! so 5 star! Maybe sometime I might be willing to read the rest of the story! I love it and would really recommend it to others. No fully spoilers here but I'll mark it as a spoiler.

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meixiaolian

I like the way you write since itsss so detailed and also I like Raiden. <3 <3 I also like the named of the academy, soooo unique. Keep writing :))

3yr
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Oemar_danoes

The storyline is tremendous! It's a legit fantasy book & would be perfectly loved by the readers. I am considering it 5 stars to show my fundamental underpinning to the dear author!

3yr
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ShadowPrincess96

The storyline is epic! It's a legit fantasy book & would be perfectly loved by the readers. I am rating it 5 star to show my initial support to dear author! Keep it up❤️❤️

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ayaneisme

The story is pretty interesting, and the presentation of it is done very well. My only complaint is that you use single quotations for speech, which was confusing at first as some people use single quotes for thought. Other then that, well done!

3yr
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bibiyenini

Perfect! The fantasy romance book is lit! Gotta have some chills while reading this, because it felt like real! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for all fantasy readers!

3yr
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Jwcwwd

This is a good book. Gotta admit that this book is way lot better than any other books I've read like for real. I mean the character designs and the world background I mean everything is PERFECTO!!!

3yr
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Nalced11

It’s super interesting and I can’t wait to figure out what happens next! No noticeable typos but a few words that seem a bit out of place though they were very easy to look over lol. Overall I really liked it <3

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Bodia_N

The setting of this story gives a feeling of mystery. As the reader, it is up to you to find out why there holds dark secrets in the novel's world.

3yr
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Amaira_Knight

really like the story so far.It made feel as if I'm experiencing it own my own. Waiting for author to release more chapters as soon as possible.

3yr
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nourhaffar3112

Even though your story is short, I am sure it is still ongoing and unfinished. The title makes it look so appealing and the contents really are so. You are a skilled writer and I hope you improve even more! Good luck with your future in writing!!

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FST
LV 15 Badge

I love the premise of this story so far and i really hope that more chapters get released soon. I am very curious which direction the story will take in the future.

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merthur2020

There's always something so intriguing when a character enters a new phase in his life and that's what happened here. The intro to the next chapter pulls one to the world the author created. I'm looking forward to more chapters 🙂

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Ibisen

The wording and atmosphere pulls you in right away. I would love to see where the story goes. It's full of mystique and intrigue just two chapters in. Keep it up!

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Shadow_Hunter0327

I loved how you introduced the story. I love the story plot and can't wait till you update more! The only thing i would advise checking grammar. Otherwise it looks really good

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