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The Sin of Pride on the Straw Hat Ship (One Piece)
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The Sin of Pride on the Straw Hat Ship
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This is written extremely badly not even names were left unharmed this is just completely wrong there is no China in one piece his name is Koby not Kirby I'm just leaving
Not only does this story have horrendous grammar to the point where you can hardly understand it there’s also the fact that this main character is weak and it’s quite disappointing to see sunshine be used by a disgraceful character. Atleast escanor was smart enough to store some of the energy inside of his weapon so that he could use it at night when he was at his weakest point.
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I don’t know if this was translated from another fanfiction but you need to get someone to translate it better because it is very hard to read and so far I haven’t even seen a single mention of heat coming from The mc or even a mention of how he is weak a night
this is so poorly written sometimes is ridiculous I can't believe no one told you how poorly written this is I mean do you even have someone reading your stuff before you upload it nothing makes sense that you have written down