The Sovereign's Shadow

My name is Viol.
I was born 5 minutes after the beginning of time.
And I will narrate to you the story of Zyros Myrandur.
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Zyros Myrandur starts out as relatively insignificant. A small note in a council report, stating that he was missing, presumed dead, since the day of his parents' murder. He was two at the time. He is then taken in by an old man who has nothing else to do but teach him the ways of the world. Well, worlds. From there he rises to become the beginning of something that would affect innumerable worlds for an eternity to come.
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This is my first book - that I published somewhere. English is not my native language but I do consider myself rather well-versed in it. Even so, I tend to make errors simply due to oversight. I'd be happy to correct them if you find any. At the same time, I am treating this novel as more of a learning experience for any of the other novels, I intend to write. So, naturally, I would be glad for any constructive criticism on your part. Also excuse or point out any factual errors, please.
I do hope you enjoy my novel. :)