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Poor translation ruined this story !!! It might be interesting novel, but a bstrd decided to ruin it. If it MTL why bother upload it here? .
I don't mind reading a novel that is written by someone whose english isn't the best. I don't mind a translation that is overly literal if the story is good. But this...piece of work is so badly translated that it makes some MTL look good. I can just barely follow what is going on in the barest of senses and much of the meaning is lost. Might be a good story but no way I am going to read more of this garbage to find out.
its fine the story is average the background is fine but if you could explain a bit more about the place and background the writing is um lets just say the same as google translate it feels out of place instead of explaining i feel like the explaining give me more quistion because i feel there is something odd in the sentence because of the lack of explaining and english and if you could talk more about the character apperance thats all i have to say about it
The first chapter was all I could read. It seems a machine translation. A bad quality one with minimal editing. I gave average rating to all other than writing quality as without reading the story can't judge.
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story is great but translation is basically Machine translation ...................sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Nice Idea but it looks like or was written by a 13 years old child thats how naive this novel is. I like strong MC but here it is just annoing that you just wish someone comes and destroys them all.All in all Nice Idea but writer sucks bih time
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Poor translation ruined this story !!! It might be interesting novel, but a bstrd decided to ruin it. If it MTL why bother upload it here? .
I don't mind reading a novel that is written by someone whose english isn't the best. I don't mind a translation that is overly literal if the story is good. But this...piece of work is so badly translated that it makes some MTL look good. I can just barely follow what is going on in the barest of senses and much of the meaning is lost. Might be a good story but no way I am going to read more of this garbage to find out.
its fine the story is average the background is fine but if you could explain a bit more about the place and background the writing is um lets just say the same as google translate it feels out of place instead of explaining i feel like the explaining give me more quistion because i feel there is something odd in the sentence because of the lack of explaining and english and if you could talk more about the character apperance thats all i have to say about it
The first chapter was all I could read. It seems a machine translation. A bad quality one with minimal editing. I gave average rating to all other than writing quality as without reading the story can't judge.
Hahahahahah F F F F F F D F F F F F D D D D F F F F F D V F U C K Y I U M I T H E R F U C K E R F
story is great but translation is basically Machine translation ...................sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Nice Idea but it looks like or was written by a 13 years old child thats how naive this novel is. I like strong MC but here it is just annoing that you just wish someone comes and destroys them all.All in all Nice Idea but writer sucks bih time