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Write a reviewHELLO YIN_YANG_MASTER AND I HOPE YOU ALWAYS HEALTHY. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and donโt drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Bro don't drop it please, at least write 60+ chapters............ V. V. V. V. V.. V. V.. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. VP. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. VP.. V. V. V. V... V. VP. VP. V.
Good story and grammar and plot.... Suggestion; OP MC..like level 60 by the time he is 11.., strong and smart..no retarded MC, no training others or some team ****-lone MC..one man army style [its cooler and plus its boring if MC requires others help]...romance and fluff [why not?]..keep it happy and fluff..no angsty tragic ****....add some bash [why not? we need someone to hate]
Story is good so far, Keep up the good work. And I like how you the story started till now. Canโt wait for more chapters for this story. ;)
Upvote the review so that everyone will be able to read it. It is still a bit rough. But I donโt have much time to make big changes to the story line since I have college for mast of the week so expect updates on weekends. I would like any corrections you can give me in either chapter or paragraph comments. Thanks for reading.
This Story is good๐๐ ๐ ๐๐....... Definitely, but the update is tooooo slow๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ญ ........................... Author plsssss๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐................... Update MORE and FASTER๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ
HELLO YIN_YANG_MASTER AND I HOPE YOU ALWAYS HEALTHY. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and donโt drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Bro don't drop it please, at least write 60+ chapters............ V. V. V. V. V.. V. V.. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. VP. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. VP.. V. V. V. V... V. VP. VP. V.
Good story and grammar and plot.... Suggestion; OP MC..like level 60 by the time he is 11.., strong and smart..no retarded MC, no training others or some team ****-lone MC..one man army style [its cooler and plus its boring if MC requires others help]...romance and fluff [why not?]..keep it happy and fluff..no angsty tragic ****....add some bash [why not? we need someone to hate]
Story is good so far, Keep up the good work. And I like how you the story started till now. Canโt wait for more chapters for this story. ;)
Upvote the review so that everyone will be able to read it. It is still a bit rough. But I donโt have much time to make big changes to the story line since I have college for mast of the week so expect updates on weekends. I would like any corrections you can give me in either chapter or paragraph comments. Thanks for reading.
This Story is good๐๐ ๐ ๐๐....... Definitely, but the update is tooooo slow๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ญ ........................... Author plsssss๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐................... Update MORE and FASTER๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ ๐ฅบ