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The rise of Hypnos, the god of sleep, after being defeated in the war of the divine pantheons.
Ps .. I don't really have a good level of fluency in English. Please be patient and correct me if you see something wrong. ^-^
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It’s pretty good and an interesting take on Harry Potter. The grammar could use some work as the genders are often wrote wrongly but that’s common for people writing in their second language and if you can look past that it’s a good read.
Hey, author here! Yes. I came to vote for my own book: 3 With more stars, the book will possibly be more visible to others, so .... ;3 ;3 ;3 ;3 ;3 ;3
If you have a good shipping base and a little better writing. Thanks for tua Chapter ^-^........................................................................................................................
The writing is a little bad at first, but later in the book it starts to improve. Continue the work and if possible get me out of this inmsonia hahaha S2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2
Well, I really wanted to read this and I endured the error betwen he/him/she/her/etc. But, after about three chapter (when Mc.Gonagall is called his "wife"), I just droped this story. It's a shame really because I quite wanted to know how this story would develop but... Well... I can stand some mistakes in a story but, when I read something that give me a headache because it's not understandable, I stop. Well, I still might come back in some week if an editor is willing to make the story more pleasant. Anyway, good luck, author.
I don't want to slip in a banana :O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O
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O Deus do Sono pode ser sonâmbulo? Fica com você essa questão jkikkk S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2E2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2E2S2 S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2E2S2
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Just Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just write better please ;-;
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Great Story! Needs more editing for the constant change of he & she, and him & her. Overall good. Keep up the good work! ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
love it hope the is an ongoing thing plus really well-written XP XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
Almighty God of Sleep, Make me sleep, I who is cursed with insomnia, can be cured by you , God of Sleep. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp!