The torturing system

hi guys, this is my first time making a novel, so let me know if you like it or not
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John has died, he was found by the police so he decided to kill himself with a grenade, including the officer "if I'm dying, your dying with me!" so when he died, he was chosen to be given the torture system to torture people across the multiverse that deserve to be tortured to death.
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