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I don't have to do my normal notation due to there only being 5 chapters.;,;. Constructive Criticism: I pointed out some errors I found while reading, also I see that it's been a full month since you last updated this book. I hope you plan to finish this at some point because dropping a book is something that's frowned upon and will sometimes turn readers away from reading other stories you wish to create. Positive Feedback: Good plot, character development, and world background... You found a way to turn re-incarnation into a time travel to a parallel dimension or something of that nature, nice.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;. Personal Feedback: this will remain in my Library for another 5 months if I get no further updates to when you plan to continue this book, if I do get specifics, then I will keep it until either it's updated, your date passes, or the 5 months pass, if it's updated, I will follow it, otherwise, whichever comes second of the other two, will cause me to drop it.;,;. Hope I don't end up dropping this due to me feeling like it was Dropped by the author.;,;.
Where are the chapter's? Shah, l was actually looking forward to it. .....................,.,...,.,,..,.,.,.,.','','I,',',,'!+,',,,'.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,n,,n
It's actually really good. Though there are grammatical problems it was still engaging. The story itself was pretty intriguing and it hooked me on the third chapter! Hope for more chapters (^ o ^)/
I will shamelessly 5-ing myself. D***, I hate the 140 character restriction. Well, I hope somebody likes my novel. I will try to make it good enough.