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The Undoer

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[The Undoer: Supervillain Lich from Cape Society to a Fantasy World Unlike Anything!]
For 2000 Years, I have fought this world’s champions…
And for 2000 years, I had seen myself change…
Finally, for 2000 years, I learned of defeat…
The Undoer was a Psychic-based villain who had existed since the dawn of superpowers. He was the strongest psychic to ever exist with a mind so powerful he could not die. Time would rewound itself if he so-willed. Even old age could not get him. When his body decayed, his mind would remain, imbued to what was left of his skeleton— proving his ghost to be eternal.
Only after 2000 years had the Heroes of Humanity been able to defeat him— though they were not able to kill him, they were able to exile him somewhere as far away as possible from Earth.
“Yes, I have tasted defeat. But it is fine. This was only a temporary setback… My plans have not changed. Oh, my lovely daughter… No matter how long it would take, I shall resurrect you!”
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[Character Profile—
Name: Ivan Montano
Alias: The Undoer
Type: Psychic
Motivation: Resurrect his daughter, and pursue a happy life.
Threat Level: Continental.
Appearance: White skeleton exuding purple aura, and wears a dark robe.
Recorded Feats: destroyed multiple countries, created undead via telepathy, mind controlled an entire city and possibly a country (latter was unconfirmed), melted a brain from extreme distance, —omitted hundred several feats recorded over the past two millennia (see more).
Defeated: Year 4027, December 13. The Heroes of Humanity employed the Exile Strategy to finally get rid of The Undoer once and for all. Two centuries ago, a clairvoyant by the name of Sarah Mendez had learned of the unique telepathic variant ability of The Undoer to turn back time. More studies were conducted on how to deal with The Undoer. It had been deemed that the superpowers needed for the strategy were mainly hypnotic sleep, teleportation, telepathy, and specific mind-resilient abilities. Over 800 psychics from three generations had been gathered for the operation. Cutting-edge technology was also employed for the operation: power nullifiers, mind dampeners, electro-static shields, nth barriers, warp enhancers, psychic multipliers, and micro-healing. Along with 800 psychics and the Nine Pillars of Humanity, The Undoer had been subdued for a short second— using the teleporter-class psychics as axis and with the support of the provided technology, the operation to exile The Undoer had succeeded. To where? No one knew. Casualty report: Five of the Nine Pillars of Humanity, 728 Psychics, and over 81,622 civilians.]

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lifiiuuuu

Well, what can i say aside from.... Woah what a powerful introduction to a story. That aside, the way that characters interact and think so far makes the reader feels that they are alive.

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This is my WPS Entry for the Year 2024. The story is basically a Lich from a world of superheroes and supervillains, getting the isekai treatment. My WPS entry is for the 'villain' genre. MC was a 'motivated' evil and was mostly unprincipled. The MC has an interesting powerset from the perspective of Supers, meaning he wouldn't do magic, but he more or less could still qualify as a Lich. Instead of a Magic-casting Lich, we have a Psychic-based Lich. MC was OP, and he could likely power stomp his way through the story, but I am going to write it in a more narrative-focus way so that it wouldn't be too predictable.

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