The Wedding of Anthony Fresco

Hi! This review will be what I think of my little short story. Writing Quality: Although I've done my best as to not screw up with basic grammar, punctuations, and the what-nots, I'd be foolish of me to not say that I don't really grasp when to use semi-colons and hypens. There'll be also a few weird sentence structures, mainly with transitioning to various POV's. Stoey Development: I did my best with making a somewhat cliche story a little mote complex and profound. I don't think profound is the right word. It's my first novel that I'll finish to completion so I'm having a hard time to make sure it's readable yet still enjoyable. Character Design: Oh, boy! I mean, it's a story about superheroes. The best character here is the clone of Sam Elliot engineered to be a very bad father. Updating Stability: I'll try to update every Tuesday and Thursday GMT +8. But if I have time then I'll do a saturday upload. World Background: The story is centered around Biefurt City. Most of the background and history will also be centered around the city, but I'll include a bit of the other areas. Organizations ans Super teams will also be included, mentioned, and will even make appearances. Thanks for reading! If you have any complaints or see any errors, feel free to do so anywhere you like.