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Edited by Thebrowneyedgirl
It is about the love between two people who are not meant to be together, but ended up falling hard for each other.
The girl goes to the past where she finds a man who will become her whole life.
Even though they both love each other dearly, they will not be able to express it until a certain turn of events.
But who knows, fate could actually be the cruelest thing to play in their lives....
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"Wah! Sorry! Are you alright? Here, I will help you get up."
Shiv stretched out his hand.
'You really think I will help you get up? Now is my chance to see what you were trying so hard to hide from me!'
Shiv didn't notice that Ira had a sinister smile on her face. The moment he reached out his hand, she pulled him and tied his hands above his head with the ribbon from her robe. She pushed him to a ground and undid his clothes.
Suddenly a realization stroke her! 'What is this situation? Isn't it like I am jumping on him??'
"I never thought you would actually take the initiative. You are so straightforward..." He teased her with his soft and seductive tone.
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'It would be good if I could just get swept away in the moment atleast once... But why am I feeling scared? What is wrong with me falling in love? I just love him... I want to be with him... Is that so wrong?'
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This was so plain in writing and good talking best in word good in title and fabulous in character then its over all good to u be the best and be the healer
Has i missed to give this story a star so i am doing it now ๐ ur doing the good job now keep it up have a nice day. In Scarlet love i think u have something to say about.
It was good and i am waiting for next chapter and i am eager to know about the next chapter so upload the chapter soon. Have a cover photo to your story to be good
I will straight up say... my ratings on stability of updating, character design, and world background shouldnt be taken si seriously. Ive only read the first chapter, no i only read part of the first chapter and can only say that it was very disappointing in comparison to its reviews. The writing quality was so immature that i could read beyong several paragrapgs. There were grammer mistakes and the transition and introduction of ideas were ******* and rather hard to read. From thsi first chapter i also had found the character perceived as perfect which seemed a bit cliche. There may however be a good story line that a person who can ignore poor writing quality.
The more I read the more I feel drawn into it. To be honest the starting was so slow.... I even thought of dropping it..... But glad I din't! I really love it! So guys.... who feels like dropping it mid way, please don't do that, if you do then you will miss out something so cool and interesting!! I really really love!! Thanks for the hard work Author!! :D
I love the way you have portrayed the difference between the two worlds. I can't wait for our Ira and Shiv to fall in love. They are both cute as it is. Simply loving it ๐๐ Thanks for the chaps author
Im Waiting for your next chapter. Seetha's character is too good as of now. I hope in next chapter Shiv will play major role. Im Waiting for your next chapter. Seetha's character is too good as of now. I hope in next chapter Shiv will play major role.
Author u r doing a good work it's getting more and more interesting . I'm loving it please release more chaps. There are a lot of twists and turns as far as I have read. It's quite cool. Thanks for ur hard work. ๐
Even though this novel has just begun, it's already very interesting! Sometimes you catch me off guard! I will be thinking some kind of development but something totally different happens and that different thing is what makes it interesting in my point of view. Thanks for the chaps author! Keep up the good work ๐
This is my first time writing a novel and english is not my first language. If you find any faults or room for improvements or if you find it interesting please let me know. I will be waiting for your reviews :)
I found this story very interesting. The characters and the world is depicktedvere vividly and I will be waiting for more updates from you, author๐
The story goes around well but I feel the author needs to be working much more on the spelling and could see that there are too many characters confusing a little but all are portrayed in a very well manner. Also needs to be working on the tenses. Otherwise the story is going great with around Ira and Shiv. ๐
What ever shiv and his people are doing they should be quick, well maybe this man is a good man, then he should protect her. Even at that I love this novel but my complain is that the production is too slow.
This book is really interesting especially now that Ira is missing. The question is still, how will they rescue her ? Will she burn along with the pleasant.
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Could see that the author is going good as they are updating a chapter daily. Really appreciate that.๐should be doing that on a daily basis. Keep it up ๐๐
It's very good ,I like how the story goes by and Its not very hard to understand. I think this is one of the best stories I read. And it will make you excite to know what will happen on the story so keep it up..