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I love this story. I love the crossover elements and I think the writing quality in general is fantastic. Truly, this is one of the best fan-fictions on the website. Keep up the good work :)
The story has a very good concept and I quite like the development of the story so far. The elements from other shows and movies are also merged well with the story. Keep up the good work.
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Love the book hope the author will come back to the book some day (hopefully soon) donβt know if you got writers block or smt else hope your doing good author. PS your a really good author the book draws you in wanting for more.
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I love this book, the story build up is great and the way you crosover everything is amazing i just wish you would update soon i need to know what happens next
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this is a great fan fic i love it and I really wanna see this grow and hopefully it will hit top 10 it's certainly worthy I hope people can put more power stone into this it's a great story
Author sama gave up.._.._. /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// ///////
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I can't say much except it's Fantastic ππ»I love the story the crossover is amazingly done I really love your work .................................................................
Great book. Writting and grammer is good as well as story development. Mc is cold hearted but not stupidly so and very intelligent. I recommend this book
Sorry but it canβt be positive. Update stability. Nope. Story development. It looks forced and not thought though. There is no consequences of joining the worlds and everything is going as in original stories. Character design. The mc sucks the most. The author tries to show him as good guy but failed at it. He gave the mafia bosses immortality by sacrificing innocent people with excuse that they would die one way or the other. Really? If you give a possibility of immortality to people in power by killing innocent you think they will hold back? Theres more stuff like this but meh. World background without innovation.
Are You gonna continue? Im really enjoying your novel thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The title of this novel is incorrect. Instead of "To be a Demon God in Marvel" it should be "To be a Angelic Saint in Marvel." The MC does have a demonic bloodline, but that's all. His personality, and his behaviour is completely heroic. In the end, I feel deceived. It's false advertising.
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La historia esta interesante pero con tanta cosa esta el riesgo de que todo se vaya a la mrd con tantos mundos juntos, bueno va avanzando y veremos igual la historia esta buena
please make him more cunning like a real devil like exploiting a loophole in the contract or scheming.. and keep the hard workππππππ .
Great novel, excellently written. Dialogues are top notch, characters as well. Story is developing slowly but is written well enough to give it 5/5. All universums are expertly woven together without any holes or problems. Only demerit in all this pile of well written chapters is stability of updates or therefore lack of it. Chapters are uploaded sometimes twice a week or even once a month. So this is it.
Una kk el MC estΓ‘ tan nerfeado que es una puta mierda, primero era un demonio estaba bien, pero despuΓ©s se puso a ayudar a todas las personas a querer que cambien para bien y el autor sigue nerfeado al MC es un dios demonio pero es lo mΓ‘s dΓ©bil de los demonios que hay
This kind of fan fic is delicious I'm enjoying his power play at Chuck and I will continue to enjoy as long as you keep writing. So please author keep writing you're doing a good job.
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I like the part where you mixed multiple worlds οΏΌtogetherοΏΌ. I hope you continue writing and you stay safe with the Covid I wonder if heβll except the position.οΏΌ
Amazing story so far good characters just now need round of chapter's and I'm set well done and keep up the good work and please can you release more and more it's a really good and highly recommend it
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a unique concept of a lot of troupes and world's creating a mish mash of fantasy that works surprisingly well considering what it is made of
A great story..............................................................................................................................................................................
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its a nice story with a likeable mc.please continue updating ππππππππππππππ looking forward to story progression,ππππππππ
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The story is so interesting and the author really gets you hungry for more chapters as well as the mic being friends with a evil overlord with the mix of magic and science itβs really great
Reveal Spoiler I love this story. I love the crossover elements and I think the writing quality in general is fantastic. Truly, this is one of the best fan-fictions on the website. Keep up the good work :)
The story has a very good concept and I quite like the development of the story so far. The elements from other shows and movies are also merged well with the story. Keep up the good work.
systems are collarsππππππππππππππππ©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ©π©π©π©π©πππππ
Love the book hope the author will come back to the book some day (hopefully soon) donβt know if you got writers block or smt else hope your doing good author. PS your a really good author the book draws you in wanting for more.
are there any new chapters ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I love this book, the story build up is great and the way you crosover everything is amazing i just wish you would update soon i need to know what happens next
Please update111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
this is a great fan fic i love it and I really wanna see this grow and hopefully it will hit top 10 it's certainly worthy I hope people can put more power stone into this it's a great story
Author sama gave up.._.._. /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// ///////
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I can't say much except it's Fantastic ππ»I love the story the crossover is amazingly done I really love your work .................................................................
Great book. Writting and grammer is good as well as story development. Mc is cold hearted but not stupidly so and very intelligent. I recommend this book
Sorry but it canβt be positive. Update stability. Nope. Story development. It looks forced and not thought though. There is no consequences of joining the worlds and everything is going as in original stories. Character design. The mc sucks the most. The author tries to show him as good guy but failed at it. He gave the mafia bosses immortality by sacrificing innocent people with excuse that they would die one way or the other. Really? If you give a possibility of immortality to people in power by killing innocent you think they will hold back? Theres more stuff like this but meh. World background without innovation.
Are You gonna continue? Im really enjoying your novel thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The title of this novel is incorrect. Instead of "To be a Demon God in Marvel" it should be "To be a Angelic Saint in Marvel." The MC does have a demonic bloodline, but that's all. His personality, and his behaviour is completely heroic. In the end, I feel deceived. It's false advertising.
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La historia esta interesante pero con tanta cosa esta el riesgo de que todo se vaya a la mrd con tantos mundos juntos, bueno va avanzando y veremos igual la historia esta buena
please make him more cunning like a real devil like exploiting a loophole in the contract or scheming.. and keep the hard workππππππ .
Great novel, excellently written. Dialogues are top notch, characters as well. Story is developing slowly but is written well enough to give it 5/5. All universums are expertly woven together without any holes or problems. Only demerit in all this pile of well written chapters is stability of updates or therefore lack of it. Chapters are uploaded sometimes twice a week or even once a month. So this is it.
Una kk el MC estΓ‘ tan nerfeado que es una puta mierda, primero era un demonio estaba bien, pero despuΓ©s se puso a ayudar a todas las personas a querer que cambien para bien y el autor sigue nerfeado al MC es un dios demonio pero es lo mΓ‘s dΓ©bil de los demonios que hay
This kind of fan fic is delicious I'm enjoying his power play at Chuck and I will continue to enjoy as long as you keep writing. So please author keep writing you're doing a good job.
Reveal Spoiler I like the part where you mixed multiple worlds οΏΌtogetherοΏΌ. I hope you continue writing and you stay safe with the Covid I wonder if heβll except the position.οΏΌ
Amazing story so far good characters just now need round of chapter's and I'm set well done and keep up the good work and please can you release more and more it's a really good and highly recommend it
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a unique concept of a lot of troupes and world's creating a mish mash of fantasy that works surprisingly well considering what it is made of
A great story..............................................................................................................................................................................
SUPERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MORE MORE MMORE MORE MORE π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π· π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π·π«π· πβ―οΈπ§ββοΈπππβπβ‘β―οΈβοΈβ¦βͺοΈπ―
its a nice story with a likeable mc.please continue updating ππππππππππππππ looking forward to story progression,ππππππππ
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The story is so interesting and the author really gets you hungry for more chapters as well as the mic being friends with a evil overlord with the mix of magic and science itβs really great
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