To Conquer The Stars

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YungMastuh

Well, although I was expecting the continuation of the Mecha story, this is a pleasant surprise. As always, top-notch work from Reapr and this is actually an interesting story. he does have a system, but the system pretty much gave him the middle finger and dipped, who knows when it'll return. The actions, thought process, and reactions of Mark feel human and natural, especially his cursing. Its pacing for now seems alright and overall, this is a pretty decent sci-fi story. 10/10 would recommend

LV 14

Crimson_Reapr

I feel like it's about time I post the obligatory Author's 4.5-star review. The reason for 4.5 stars is that, although I feel like I'm cooking like crazy, no story is perfect, and mine is far from it. I write because I enjoy it and because others enjoy what I create, but there are shortcomings in my work. Things that I tend to overlook, even with the help of Grammarly, are the following: A handful of spelling mistakes and run-on sentences. Does that make my work less enjoyable? No. Does that mean I will stop writing? No. Does that make me human? Hell yes. Now, to close off, I would love it if you lot could be like @YungMastuh. Just go crazy commenting on my work, and if you enjoy my work, give it a review. It will allow it to get traction and be read by many others. I realize that commenting can be a little bit of a hassle if you aren't reading it, but listening to it while doing something else. Trust me, I do the same. This message is more for those who enjoy looking at words with their eyeballs for hours on end. Thank you all for the time you've spent on my story and the stones you've chucked at me. They are part of what keeps me going.

LV 14

TrahsPnada

This probably one of the best written space sci-fi webnovles ive read. The author does a great job on the minor moments but the writing quality really shines through in the deeper more impactful moments. The characters are all well written and even the minor ones are written with clear motivations and goals. As far as novels go it’s currently my number one Marks journey is something I look forward to following with every update

Hi! I just wanted to tell you how much your story pulled me in every chapter felt like stepping into another world. Your writing has this effortless magic that turns simple scenes into something almost cinematic. Honestly, it would make such a stunning visual project someday. If you ever feel like exploring that idea, I’d be excited to collaborate. No expectations at all just wanted to share the thought. You can always reach out if you’d like to talk more or see my art. Thanks again for creating something so beautiful! You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love

Hey, I just finished reading your story and honestly, wow! The way you built the world and the characters had my imagination running wild the whole time. It really felt like I could see the scenes play out like a movie. I’m an artist who takes commissions for Webtoons, comics and manga. While reading your story, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or webtoon. Your writing already has that cinematic energy that would translate perfectly into panels. No pressure at all, but if you’d ever be interested in commissioning someone to bring your story to life visually, I’d love to be the one to do it. If you are down or wanna see some of my work, you can reach me on Discord (ava_crafts). Looking forward to hearing from you soon!