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To Love ru Origin of Paladin's Kingdom
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A genius in the game of kingdom building and an Otaku who rule the VRMMORPG of 22nd century was reborn into Yuki Rito.
Let's follow his journey to create the paladin kingdom with Paladin system of anime style.
In this novel you will read how a normal highschool teenager created a new world of fantasy and harem.
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Sorry guys I gonna close this fan fic and working with a person who had been teaching me English for last few months on the same fan fic with same view point but different writing and story stability. To love Ru New System.
I don't know if this is google translated or not but this is just too hard too read. The first few chapters were bearable but after that, it was terrible. I don't even know what the hell I'm reading. Some sentences don't make any sense. Some words are not even fully written, like, why? Grammer is horrible. The idea of this novel is great, I really liked it, I've rarely seen To love Ru fanfics so it was refreshing to see one but the way its written...........*sigh*...........usually I won't even write a negative review and just leave it be and move on but I want this fanfic to be good. This has potential, lots of potential if it was done correctly. Please use grammerly to fix those grammers, words and sentences. I hope you will fix it in the future author. Good luck.
Hello everyone please continue to read my fanfic and support it as knowing my weakness of the language I'll definitely improve and make other say it's a good fan fic of to love Ru for sure