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the story is beautiful only that many chapters are just description and others are more fillers, the story itself is short and follows the canon a lot even with the changes that mc has made, the world looks like aru's but in reality it is different by way of realities and various powers (accelerator is much weaker than the original) mc has good plot armor and the story itself is not very attractive but it is good to pass the time the problem is that the author doesn't know much about aru so there is some problem with the story itself, mc is a bit boring and cold, the story does not have a good growth of the mc, the love story seems a lot forced and too simple and there is no real progress i read up to ch 100 and the story has been on hiatus for a while i hope the author continues and improves
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⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
The best way to describe this fic is "it's very... anime". And not in a good way. .
Es muy bueno el fic Es el mejor asta el momento del que eh leido. Tiene mucha margen de mejora y me gusta la trama como avanza. El prota debe quedarse albino ¿porque? Por que los albinos son badas xD.
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Me Here !! I will say it again this is a masterpiece Pleade fellow readers if you read this put some good reviews cause if you've been following the book so far that mean you like it . So don't be greedy reviews are for free
Hey, uhh, I wanna volunteer as a cleaner to your fanfic, if your interested mail me: reishi.tanaka.7@gmail.com Its just that your fanfic has a good amount of potential to enter the top 10 if you fix a few things here and there, its basically a hidden gem in a hole full of crap. I'm not saying all other fanfic are crap but some of them are less than tolerable to readers, so yeah, mail me if your interested.
This is a very enjoyable and great novel you've made. I only want the Mc to end up with my Kanzaki Kaori.. ................................................................. . . . . . . .
So far this is a masterpiece . I cannot find a suitable word to describe how good it is . A brillian idea , author look like natural born prodigy like he was meant to write this book . Nothing feel forced everything fused in a perfect mix named 'plot' and i have to say a great plot you have there . Accelerator is really terrfying enemy with his calculations . It is unique , hope Hikari reach that level , also will he get a way to counter Imagine Breaker That ability is annoying real , look how far he reached with it , just saw misaka level 6 ripped it and dragons came from where it was ripped and he regenerated it back , totally Op . If it is Hikari he would be a unique level 6 in the future . I mean others try to reach level 6 with just a single ability , for Hikari he would reach that level with 7-8 abilities . If his recovery reached level 6 , he would be able go regenerate from nothing , he can heal others too recover limbs or from bad illness . . . At least we saw what Railgun capable of in level 6
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finally a toaru majutsu fanfic ❤️❤️ .. ................ .................. Es muy bueno el Fanfic.Esperando su pelea contra Othinus ..........................
This is the first fan-fiction that I have read regarding 'Index' story-line and I have to say that I am loving it. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. This is a great story to read. For the Author; I would recommend trying to build on character interactions. In what I mean, is making the interactions seem more alive, rather than an conversation that is just happening. Additionally, working on the development of creating a connecting background to others parts of the 'Index' universe. Other than that, keep up the great work!
The Storydesign until now is good the only thing i would mention, is that the MC isn't really "evil" he feels more like a Anti-Hero because until now (im currently Chapter 23) he still has this Mental barrier against killing (the innocent) and still cares about people he doesn't know. Because of that he feels more of a (Anti-)Hero.
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Went from cruel and calcula Mc to naive mc who doesn’t kill possible future enemies. Story is contradicting he went through experiments where he lost feelings because of how much pain he was inflicted yet he doesn’t kill the level 5 dude who could be a possible future enemy and give the bs reason that he doesn’t kill the innocent.
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it's good but it's bad predictable but that doesn't mean it's bad. has many plot holes but if you force yourselfe to ignore them you might enjoy
When I stumble into this fic, I read it in one go First time seeing oc with dark matter esper ability, and level 6 one at that Keep a good job author
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Overall a really great book I really am enjoying it, I created this review because I usually don't review and another novel stopped because she didn't get reviews so I am doing this because of this a really great book
This is the one o the fan-fiction that I have liked reading regarding 'Index' story-line (the other that I liked had Accelerator as mc) and I have to say that this story is interesting and well written. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. Not only that, MC is not your usual cliche who is dense and has a hero syndrome. At the same time, he is not a villain. Calling him anti-hero would be better. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of updates 4.5/5 (it's due to the period in which the author went on hiatus ) Story Development 5/5 (as of chapter 86, I don't find the story becoming boring or becoming a cliche. This shows that story is clearly well planned and is not something that is written on the hand.) Character Design 4.5/5 (Author still need to work a bit on it but he clearly improved it a lot when compared to before) World Background 5/5 Personal opinion: I recommend reading it if u like reading a powerful mc that is something between the boundary of a hero, villain(basically an anti-hero). The story is not something that will disappoint you.
Reveal Spoiler the story is beautiful only that many chapters are just description and others are more fillers, the story itself is short and follows the canon a lot even with the changes that mc has made, the world looks like aru's but in reality it is different by way of realities and various powers (accelerator is much weaker than the original) mc has good plot armor and the story itself is not very attractive but it is good to pass the time the problem is that the author doesn't know much about aru so there is some problem with the story itself, mc is a bit boring and cold, the story does not have a good growth of the mc, the love story seems a lot forced and too simple and there is no real progress i read up to ch 100 and the story has been on hiatus for a while i hope the author continues and improves
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⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
The best way to describe this fic is "it's very... anime". And not in a good way. .
Es muy bueno el fic Es el mejor asta el momento del que eh leido. Tiene mucha margen de mejora y me gusta la trama como avanza. El prota debe quedarse albino ¿porque? Por que los albinos son badas xD.
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Reveal Spoiler Me Here !! I will say it again this is a masterpiece Pleade fellow readers if you read this put some good reviews cause if you've been following the book so far that mean you like it . So don't be greedy reviews are for free
Hey, uhh, I wanna volunteer as a cleaner to your fanfic, if your interested mail me: reishi.tanaka.7@gmail.com Its just that your fanfic has a good amount of potential to enter the top 10 if you fix a few things here and there, its basically a hidden gem in a hole full of crap. I'm not saying all other fanfic are crap but some of them are less than tolerable to readers, so yeah, mail me if your interested.
This is a very enjoyable and great novel you've made. I only want the Mc to end up with my Kanzaki Kaori.. ................................................................. . . . . . . .
So far this is a masterpiece . I cannot find a suitable word to describe how good it is . A brillian idea , author look like natural born prodigy like he was meant to write this book . Nothing feel forced everything fused in a perfect mix named 'plot' and i have to say a great plot you have there . Accelerator is really terrfying enemy with his calculations . It is unique , hope Hikari reach that level , also will he get a way to counter Imagine Breaker That ability is annoying real , look how far he reached with it , just saw misaka level 6 ripped it and dragons came from where it was ripped and he regenerated it back , totally Op . If it is Hikari he would be a unique level 6 in the future . I mean others try to reach level 6 with just a single ability , for Hikari he would reach that level with 7-8 abilities . If his recovery reached level 6 , he would be able go regenerate from nothing , he can heal others too recover limbs or from bad illness . . . At least we saw what Railgun capable of in level 6
Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good.
finally a toaru majutsu fanfic ❤️❤️ .. ................ .................. Es muy bueno el Fanfic.Esperando su pelea contra Othinus ..........................
This is the first fan-fiction that I have read regarding 'Index' story-line and I have to say that I am loving it. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. This is a great story to read. For the Author; I would recommend trying to build on character interactions. In what I mean, is making the interactions seem more alive, rather than an conversation that is just happening. Additionally, working on the development of creating a connecting background to others parts of the 'Index' universe. Other than that, keep up the great work!
The Storydesign until now is good the only thing i would mention, is that the MC isn't really "evil" he feels more like a Anti-Hero because until now (im currently Chapter 23) he still has this Mental barrier against killing (the innocent) and still cares about people he doesn't know. Because of that he feels more of a (Anti-)Hero.
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Reveal Spoiler Went from cruel and calcula Mc to naive mc who doesn’t kill possible future enemies. Story is contradicting he went through experiments where he lost feelings because of how much pain he was inflicted yet he doesn’t kill the level 5 dude who could be a possible future enemy and give the bs reason that he doesn’t kill the innocent.
More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls... More pls...
it's good but it's bad predictable but that doesn't mean it's bad. has many plot holes but if you force yourselfe to ignore them you might enjoy
When I stumble into this fic, I read it in one go First time seeing oc with dark matter esper ability, and level 6 one at that Keep a good job author
Reveal Spoiler Overall a really great book I really am enjoying it, I created this review because I usually don't review and another novel stopped because she didn't get reviews so I am doing this because of this a really great book
This is the one o the fan-fiction that I have liked reading regarding 'Index' story-line (the other that I liked had Accelerator as mc) and I have to say that this story is interesting and well written. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. Not only that, MC is not your usual cliche who is dense and has a hero syndrome. At the same time, he is not a villain. Calling him anti-hero would be better. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of updates 4.5/5 (it's due to the period in which the author went on hiatus ) Story Development 5/5 (as of chapter 86, I don't find the story becoming boring or becoming a cliche. This shows that story is clearly well planned and is not something that is written on the hand.) Character Design 4.5/5 (Author still need to work a bit on it but he clearly improved it a lot when compared to before) World Background 5/5 Personal opinion: I recommend reading it if u like reading a powerful mc that is something between the boundary of a hero, villain(basically an anti-hero). The story is not something that will disappoint you.
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