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I like the idea of a kingdom building OP Mc especially in a Marvel x DC universe. The MC can just do what he wants and just turn Superman into his own personal punching bag. The Author just needs to research more about both universes and it's characters. For example: DC Has Aquaman as King of Atlantis, While MARVEL had Namor as King of Atlantis, there are also other characters that are confusing. The MC could also plunder its vast resources, like the MC could have just taken Krakoa Island or maybe the Savage Lands. He could also go to space and colonize Solar Systems and become a Galactic/Multiversal Empire and LEAVE HUMANITY IN THE DUST. All in all this story has great potential when written correctly.Keep up the good work.
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Dear future self: Not this one. Just a note that I already tried this one. Not enough narration, the story is uninformative in terms of whats going on and I couldn't get to chalter 3