Transmigrated With A Time Chamber In DxD

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Schizo_Tuna

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH As someone who have written a human centerd DxD fic, this is cap and drains your remaining braincells. put Low IQ tag next time

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Its DBZ in DxD. He is human but its all DBZ moves and everything. That aint bad, but in terms of DxD it seems mostly just a plot to get Akeno, and maybe some other characters down the road. DxD wise its already not canon, Akeno and her family live in Kuoh, which either means her plot wont happen or the author doesnt know much about dxd....

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Jassir_Hernandez

different and fresh start along with some good wishes but,,,my interest went down with that absurd akeno plot and the forced fight,,,,maybe it will improve with time but mehh

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Sky_Demon_Order

typical giga chad that have more balls than brains. the type where he thinks he is baddass if he trains with weights for 40 years and doesn't speak with anyone. Good idea but poorly executed and...... still too easy and if this was this easy some gods or devils or etc... would grab humans make them train and prolong their life with immortal herbs, fruits, water etc... and brianwash them to fight for them or experiment on them. AND even more the entire idea that yahwe humans existed(ok maybe) but that they were so strong is riddicoulus many gods primodial beings devils would be tens of 1000x years older and they would thrash any trash human that trained 200 years. It doesn't add up. I would build the premis of this fanfic on the premise of underdog a weak human from the weakest race that only has steel like will unbreakable and is aware of his weakness. I would place him in ancient times and make him fight and learn and survive. He would be strong but not beacuse he was createad strong only beauce of his convictions!!!!

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Miki_Marlo75

I like the story a little but it seems more like a manga than anything else, the chapters there are only interspersed time jumps so to speak and then nothing more than that and suddenly it comes And the fight with Baraquiel leaves a lot to be desired, and there are many things that are not explained throughout the chapters and it greatly affects the story in my opinion.

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Nymos_lvl9000

I was already imagining that the race would be human, in the end he invents an idiotic reason with idiotic arguments and launches it...I'm not surprised by the general evaluation of the work, there's no point in giving it the opportunity

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Jay_Giovanni

it had a good start but it quickly went down the drain when baraquiel came to take him as a student, maybe it'll get better later on but meh author already ruined it.

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The_man_The_myth

This is hot garbage I in the past wrote actual criticism in the hope of making it a better story but the author deleted it so f him here’s a 1 star

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Judy_Morgan_5854

Absolutely love the concept and how there is a timer. It makes it feel balanced without being too much of a disadvantage to the mc. I love how you are going full human in this. Keep up the good work. I’m cheering for you. 10/10

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Lizrock

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Marfu_Mausul

At first it was interesting with a concept like that and the choice of reincarnation which was very interesting but unfortunately the execution was really lacking, it's like reading Chinese fanfiction

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PervySempai

Not my cup of tea, I've read xiania with better plot, at least they had some original moves on there fights and the forcing of the plot only happens maybe once, you've forced plot at least 3 times in 6 chapters, which barely had anything in them of substance to begin with, if this is the flow of the novel I'm out here

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Rosana_Marques

think 4.0 is too low considering the amount of trash cans that exist here in this app with way better rating, will never understand webnovel readers, not counting the absurd amount of bots that exist in multiple comment sections. a new idea, not the same dxd fanfic ao far, it has good potential imo. keep it up

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DiabloRedfox

he's just a dumb muscle character, doesn't think much and the akenos father part was bad too, he's like a angry Goku with who doesn't think on what his actions do

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asssssshhole

you have good writing and good update, lad.just, you're nerfing mc too much.if it was any devil or fallen angel who possess mc item, it will show extraordinary result.if you're read dxd canon, when Kiba yuuto practice serious training, his power level increased massive amount in half of year (from low class to ultimate class).what about mc??you're nerfing too much, author.

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Maluop

This story seems interesting it’s just to AU for me personally. power system has nothing to do with Dxd at all

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DolphinFucker69

Good concept but fell out hard with that plot. So forced man. Get some writing advice or sth.

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Vastoking

The author basically lied about the mcs cheat being the time chamber, mc has access to dragon ball ki and might apparently end up having chakra, it would have been better if the story stayed true to dxd 's power system, I mean there are tons of strong humans which can be used as reference in dxd like Vasco for example, even without sacred gears or holy swords and just his physical body dude can beat a lot of ppl. also I dont think the author knows the story of dxd, dude probably only watched the anime or something. The story has potential, it can be good. Oh I also didn't mention, the mc is a little stupid. The comedy is actually pretty good.

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Darkiling

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Durjoy_Jack

It's good and unique but in chapter 80 there is a mention of something which gives me an idea that mc will cuck akeno's father. And considering he trained him in the first few chapters and had a very good relationship with akeno's father so in my point of view it's pretty bad and I hate both cucking others(those who are mc's friends) and getting cucked fanfic.