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[You have signed in!]
[Lucky spin in effect!]
[You have obtained (Immortal Body)!]
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Rion was a teenage boy who, unfortunately, had never seen the world beyond his own.
Born with a weak body and a mind too great for it, never allowed a single moment of peace; he always dreamt of the outside world, of the great nature.
His doctor had told him that he would be going out soon... but he didn't think he meant he would be outside like this.
Rion had died that day, only to be reincarnated in a tribe of Warriors. But this time his life would be different as he was accompanied by his cheats. Rion had decided to live a simple life—
[Ding!]
[You have signed in at The Spring of Youth!]
[You have obtained the passive skill (Minor Heal)!]
[Ding!]
[Lucky Spin is in effect!]
[Congratulations! You have obtained 100x reward!]
[You have obtained the passive skill (Immortal Body)!]
—Until he obtained Immortality.
He had never cared about the rewards he obtained from his sign-in system and lucky spin; he was happy with anything—everything, but... Now he could travel the world without fearing what he feared the most—death. He had gained Immortality, after all.
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Stakes would be low. Slice of Life with Action and Drama.
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Writing Quality: I didn't spot any mistakes. Simple and easy to understand. Stability of Updates: U don't have to be afraid about this, the author is a machine gun. Support him and you won't be disappointed. Story Development: MC starts as a newborn and goes from there. Character Design: MC's inner monologue might look inconsistent in some instances, but he has the right not to know how to react to this world and the situations he's in. His personality is not defined from the beginning. The side characters are not cookie-cutter NPCs, their depth will keep you invested. World Background: Well, it's a primitive fantasy world, which probably means lots of opportunities for the MC from the modern world to shine with his knowledge. It is a bit too early to tell.
What is the secret of writing such a good novel author san? can I get some advice? you are really good at this!
I've mad it to chapter 20 and it's pretty decent so far, only ishu might be it's a little bit boring, but that's because MC is still only 8yo, and his training arch has just now started I think. overall so far there are no grammar mistakes that I noticed, characters are decent, the thing I hate most is when an author can only write dumb characters and so far there hasn't been even one.
like the novel so far. Just hope in the future MC goes to a different planet to sign in, which will be cool.
Shameless Author's unnecessarily long review here! Why the 5 stars? - Because that's the maximum we can do. Now that we have answered the important question, let's move on to some less important ones. What's the story about? - IDK, read it!! The story follows Rion a reincarnated teenager, who didn't get to enjoy life cause of his weak body. He died and was reincarnated into the Dhaevrak Tribe — an overpowered tribe. After his reincarnation, Rion obtains a sign-in system and a lucky spin, which rewards him with the (Immortal Body) skill at the start of the story. The story's main focus would be on his travels to new locations, his interactions with others, and how he changes the world. What's the Main Character like? - Probably like a main character... Rion is a flawed character. He wants to see the mystics of this fantasy world but fears dying — before obtaining Immortality ofc. He wishes to be a hero... sometimes but doesn't want to be selfless. He loves his parents the most but doesn't want them to know about his system or reincarnation. Is it romance? - Yes, He would have a single Female lead ( Unlike most of us who have zero female lead... Me included.) Is it a harem? - Idk... Gimme a gift and I'll tell you. (It is not a harem.) Is the MC gonna aura farm? - Yes. And we are done with all (I think) of the less important questions... I truly hope that you check out the story. (Do it, please!) You can comment below for any questions... ANY... I wish you a good time.