Hello author-san , your concept is good. I really like it. but you should focus on writing. Everything is so fast and conversation has no feelings in it. It's like a very fast paced fix it novel.so please try to improve your writing skills.Thank you for your hardwork.
Hello author-san , your concept is good. I really like it. but you should focus on writing. Everything is so fast and conversation has no feelings in it. It's like a very fast paced fix it novel.so please try to improve your writing skills.Thank you for your hardwork.