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Twenty Two

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Author: elninotercono

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looking for your missing shard, feels like some shady guy has been following you around lately or maybe there's a baddie you been meaning to talk to and need info on.

look no further than room twenty two of Galileo hall, Housing the world's leading university in rift research sharpest mind.

Huegen "Huey" Cross.

A seventeen year old freshman and the logistics and supports departments lazy bone.

Huey armed with his level one ability given to him by the very thing that initially sets his world into shambles,
uses his wits to push past the boundaries set by those above him in hopes of one day becoming the man who solves the 62 year old riddle.

"Where the f*** do rifts even come from"

S Y P N O S I S P R O U D L Y S P O N S B Y C A L V I N

H U É Y S R O O M A T E & B I G G É ST F A N

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The_BestX

The writing style is good, the descriptions are accurate and there are not many of those complex descriptions, but a reasonable amount that allows for good imagination without feeling heavy, the only thing I prefer to add is the internal monologues, it would be better if they were in chapters for me. The story is intriguing, a world with special magical powers, and the events take place at a university. It's not a unique idea, but it doesn't follow the traditional mold either. The application remains the most important, and the novel is truly exciting and thrilling. Finally, I wish you the best of luck, author.

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Raymin

I love mashle and the whole magic school concepts and this drew me in right away. I loved the first 4 to 5 chapters and will definitly read more. The storytelling is very good and that also goes for the characters. Love it!

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Dionida_Rachel17

If you like magic, school and action genre come and read this novel. It pulls you in and it is amazing.

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Matthew_Babalola_4022

¡Una obra increíble! Este libro muestra el talento y la creatividad del autor de una manera excepcional. Es una lectura que atrapa y deja una impresión duradera. ¡Muy recomendado!

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elninotercono

"um, Quite the book from elnino, considering the original "The virelia Institute" was rejected a contract for sloppy writing and a poorly layered plot, issues which he hopes to have addressed with this reboot. there's always room for improvement and I'm sure he'll only be looking to get better with each review positive or slightly unpositve(he doesn't take L's)"

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ShiTzu

Thoroughly enjoyable. The whole jokes were spot-on and I kind of love the bromance between these characters (lol no, I'm not gonna ship them). Well done.

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author_zia

When it comes to writing without a single boring moment, leave it for bro. This is just too good 💯💯

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DaoistsMKx4X

Interesting book, the book is fascinating and intriguing. The plot and the writing is good as well. Continue to keep writing, keep the good job man.

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Raphael_Lawal

Very engaging plot. Keep up the good work.

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James_Trey

I loved this, he did a good job with the plot twist and the plot is very deep and engaging. Although the character development and writing pace can be adjusted. I'm a big fan of Calvin too

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Dayo_Adaranijo

I've been following his book since the first installment and this is a big upgrade, keep up the good work big bro, release more chapters soon I need to read this thing

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Ayley_Acer

It was a pretty amazing book, I liked the concept, similar to Mashle, one with sc fi elements in place of magic. Keep the good work. The writing style is ok, not the over-description, but some description is needed foran immersive feeling.

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Dream_escaper

Rlly enjoy the mood. A little shorter would be amazinh

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